Thursday, 25 March 2010

New Moon Community FanFic!

Howdy-Doody my fave Ho's!  Hope everyone's ok.  Had a lovely night out for my birthday, the little un's better and I had a full night's sleep, apart from slipping over on the kitchen floor this morning it's all good!

Sooooo, it's Thursday, which means it's Community FanFic day.  Carrying on from last week's Twilight start, this week we'll start with a section of New Moon!


(Totally not relevant to the starting point I've chosen, but DAMN! And he's hiding his finger nails from us.  Although obviously I've remembered they're there because I just commented on them.  And  my first thought may have been that I bet Bella was thinking 'Just keep those freakin' manky nails away from my face, Beacob' just before the pic was taken.  I say before the pic was taken, because in the pic is is blatantly thinking 'Don't look at the neck.  Don't look at the neck..')

Ok, enough Jake related rambling, let's get on with it.

  "Open mine and Edward's next," Alice said, so excited her voice was a high-pitched trill.  She held a small, flat square in her hand.
  I turned to give Edward a basilisk glare.  "You promised."
  Before he could answer, Emmett bounded through the door.  "Just in time!" he crowed.  He pushed in behind Jasper, who had also drifted closer than usual to get a good look.
  "I didn't spend a dime," Edward assured me.  He brushed a strand of hair from my face, leaving my skin tingling from his touch.
  I inhaled deeply and turned to Alice.  "Give it to me," I sighed.
  Emmett chuckled with delight.
  I tok the little package, rolling my eyes at Edward while I stuck my finger under the edge of the paper and jerked it under the tape.


Ooooh! Cliffy!  Where will we go with this?  Paper cut?  No paper cut?  Orgy?  Only you Ho's can decide!


The next chapter begins, indeed!

Have fun!

17 comments:

Mary said...

I'll have a go

Mary said...

"Open mine and Edward's next," Alice said, so excited her voice was a high-pitched trill. She held a small, flat square in her hand.
I turned to give Edward a basilisk glare. "You promised."
Before he could answer, Emmett bounded through the door. "Just in time!" he crowed. He pushed in behind Jasper, who had also drifted closer than usual to get a good look.
"I didn't spend a dime," Edward assured me. He brushed a strand of hair from my face, leaving my skin tingling from his touch.
I inhaled deeply and turned to Alice. "Give it to me," I sighed.
Emmett chuckled with delight.
I tok the little package, rolling my eyes at Edward while I stuck my finger under the edge of the paper and jerked it under the tape.

Ermmm "it's an envelope" I said
"well open it then" Edward laughed.
I opened the envelope slowly and I could feel everyones eyes on me as I did it.
"Jeez, you're all making me nervous" I laughed, trying to lighten the atmosphere.
I could see Emmett licking his lips and shuffling around a bit. Rosalie laughed and bade him to be patient which sent a ripple of laughter around the vampires.
I opened the envelop and read the words.......

Becky said...

Nice place to leave it Mary! lol.
I just have to nip to school then will be back to have a go! BBS.

Becky said...

Right, I will have a go!

Becky said...

I could see Emmett licking his lips and shuffling around a bit. Rosalie laughed and bade him to be patient which sent a ripple of laughter around the vampires.
I opened the envelop and read the words.......

Victoria' Secret

Oh My God! Alice and Edward had opened a lingerie account for me! My face immediately flushed with embarrassment as I stuttered out my thank you's.

Edward leaned down and whispered in my ear, "I don't want to wait any longer, you are 18 now. I intend to claim what is mine" I shivered as his cool breath washed over my neck, "Alice has arranged for you to stay the weekend, you girls will go shopping in the day to prepare, then I will have you all to myself." At that point Alice and Rosalie giggled, because of course they had heard everything. In fact everyone had heard! I was beyond mortified at having this conversation, but also excited. This is what I had been waiting for after all!

The weekend couldn't come fast enough!

Mrs. P @ TwiBite said...

I'm working here...brace yourselves

Mrs. P @ TwiBite said...

When the party was over Edward drove me home and said he would pick me up in the morning for our shopping trip. I didn't want him to see what I would buy, but he seemed dead set on going. I didn't argue.
The next morning we drove in silence to the mall, and he walked inhumanly fast to the front of the store. He walked with purpose past all the pink and red ruffly things, and went straight back to the wall covered in black. Before I could open my mouth to object, he had placed a leather corset and thigh high stockings in my hand, and said, "Try these on...I'll be waiting on the pink couch"
I entered the dressing room and slipped out of my clothes. I attempted to lace the corset myself, but found I was unable and started to panic...Edward was waiting, and he was growing impatient. I peeked my head out of the dressing room and said "I cant lace it up..." and before a saleswoman could walk over, Edward was in the dresssing room with me. He smirked at my half dressed state, ran his finger down the front of my chest and said, "I don't think I want to lace it...not yet"

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

I looked up at him aghast at his bravado, what had happened to the shy, I want to wait guy I was with yesterday, where had this sex munster appeared from and where was he hiding my edward...although I had to admit the way he was looking down at me and tracing his icy cold figers along my collar bones and neck was heating me up tremendously..
"Um Edward, we're in a changing room don't you think we should wait till somewhere more private, you know as its my first time and I kinda wanted something abit more than this. Erm something more romantic" I stammered out in between biting my lip.
Edward sighed and then smiled his crooked smile at me "Ok" he ageed, somewhere more romantic but I am going to try one thing. I've waited this long but you have to be very still and quiet otherwise we might get caught"

There was a chair in the changing room to the side where you could sit to um do up stuff I guessed and Edward picked it up and moved it to in front of the mirror. He never ceased to amaze me with his strength even though it was just a chair, it was a heavy, over stuffed one and he moved it as if it were made of matchwood. It mde me shiver to think if he so chose to he could break me in two just like that.
Edward saw me shiver and asked what was wrong, with a slight smile I explained I was nervous but curious to know what he was doing. In actual fact I was dripping with anticipation, I knew he was up to no good and new naughty edward was a revelation to me.

He sat on the chair and told me to sit on his lap astride him. As I sat down and wriggled around I could feel him growing hard beneath me and I groaned out loud
"Hush Bella" he said through a grin and began to stroke me back, I arched in appreciation like a cat and dug my nails into his shoulder.
Edwards lips met my neck, moved along to my jaw and back, his breath so sweet I felt faint.
"I love the colour you become when you're excited; I will miss that I think" he mused
I turned my head quickly wanting his mouth on mine but he pulled back
"Edward" I asked looking puzzled
Again he smiled and turned me so fast everything was a blur so I faced the mirror.
"I'm not ready for kisses yet Bella. Look in the mirror"
I saw myself sat on this Adonis' lap, legs open wide, hair tousled already, my eyes wanton as his hand slipped down between my thighs to the scrap of material covering my modesty.
Edward gave a low growl and ripped the lace from me. I yelped which made his amber eyes glow with excitement.
"Watch Bella" he whispered in my ear as his fingers teased between my folds...

Mary said...

He sat on the chair and told me to sit on his lap astride him. As I sat down and wriggled around I could feel him growing hard beneath me and I groaned out loud
"Hush Bella" he said through a grin and began to stroke me back, I arched in appreciation like a cat and dug my nails into his shoulder.
Edwards lips met my neck, moved along to my jaw and back, his breath so sweet I felt faint.
"I love the colour you become when you're excited; I will miss that I think" he mused
I turned my head quickly wanting his mouth on mine but he pulled back
"Edward" I asked looking puzzled
Again he smiled and turned me so fast everything was a blur so I faced the mirror.
"I'm not ready for kisses yet Bella. Look in the mirror"
I saw myself sat on this Adonis' lap, legs open wide, hair tousled already, my eyes wanton as his hand slipped down between my thighs to the scrap of material covering my modesty.
Edward gave a low growl and ripped the lace from me. I yelped which made his amber eyes glow with excitement.
"Watch Bella" he whispered in my ear as his fingers teased between my folds...
I had to grip his thighs to steady myself I was trembling so much and I could hear my own heart beating. Edward slid an icy cold finger into me and I gasped out loud. I could feel my juices flowing and the trembling intensified. He slowly pulled his finger out and gently rubbed my clit with his now very wet finger. The sensation was amazing. Nothing like the times I'd pleasured myself, this was like nothing i'd ever felt before. I could see Edward watching his own fingers as he slid two into me again. I pushed my ass onto him and heard him groan softly. I reached my hand up his thigh to stroke his cock through his jeans. He threw his head back and let out a soft growl...

Becky said...

@Nibbles & @Mary - Nice!

I will be back later when have got atleast 2 chidren in bed!

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

My body flushed to my core when I heard that sound from Edward, I was turning this God on, me, Bella, woah, what now? My mind was total mush the sensations of Edwards fingers in me were making me forget to reciprocate and although Edward couldn't read my mind he murmured "let me pleasure you, I've waited long enough to touch you..just watch Isabella" I stared at the mirror Edwards beautiful eyes shone from beneath his lashes "You smell so good, I wonder what..." and I whimpered as his fingers left me and slid into his mouth and his eyes closed as if in reverence "Oh Bella, my Bella" he exclaimed. When his eyes opened they were darker, blazing into mine, I couldn't look away as he plunged his fingers back into me, his thumb grazing over my clit as he slid them in and out of me, his mouth on my neck and shoulder, his tongue licking me. He was taunting me in a low voice, telling me what he was doing, how hot I felt to him, how wet I was, how he couldn't wait to get me home. I rocked back and forth on his hand while his thumb stroked me on to greater heights. I was moaning loudly and he clapped his other hand over my mouth. "Bella, the shop assistant is coming soon, imagine if she saw us, would she watch us?"
I blushed a deep red turned on further by the prospect of being caught. Edward moved his hand from my lips and his long cool fingers replaced his thumb to rub a little harder and faster, his fingers pushing in and out of me, their length reaching places I couldn't, I turned my head to him whispering in a strangled voice "I want you to fuck me when we get home, I need you in me Edward, I want you so much" his lips met mine to silence my orgasm, my body shaking as I lurched forward letting go.
I heard a voice calling "is everything alright dear" and as Edward knelt befor me his mouth covering my wet, hot kitty I managed to cry out "Yes" in a high pitched squeek, "I'm fine" the last part coming out as an "ahhhhh" as Edwards long cold tongue entered me.

Mrs Holden the shop assistent turned away to walk out with a smirk on her face, kids she thought, they really think I don't know anything.

Stan said...

WOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!

ROFL at my cameo!

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

Where the foook is everyone-I'm writing a novel here LOL. I figured seeing as you wrote me in I'd write you in

Dangrdafne said...

OK, um, well, wow, changing rooms will never be the same again! WOW! Phew I need to fan myself.

Stacked Like Sookie said...

@Nibbles, you HAVE to write a fic!

Royalwe1 said...

I love the direction you took the birthdat scene. Way better than a papercut!!!

Jayla said...

lovely- just back from class... thanks for the pick me up.