Thursday, 18 March 2010

Community FanFic Thursday!

Is it just me or are the weeks flying by stupidly fast?  Blink and it's time for CFF or FFF again.  I'm really annoyed with myself this week because every night I've fallen asleep while I'm putting the kids to bed and missed the entire evening.  Think I'll send Mr Stan up with them tonight so it doesn't happen!  It also meant that I missed all of the Twitter activity about the UK Remember Me premiere.


I'm also in a good mood because after weeks of nothing, I'm managing to do some writing again.  I've been working on my new fic and this time round I'm trying to make the chapters a bit longer.  I've nearly come to the end of one and then I'm going to go back to Natural Satellites and Shooting Stars and do some more on that because I've seriously neglected it lately.

Ok then, on to this week's Community FanFic.  This week we're going to start with a paragraph from the actual Twilight book.  I thought the meadow would be as good a place as any, so here's your opener, have fun!

  I lightly trailed my hand over the perfect muscles of his arm, followed the faint pattern of bluish veins inside the crease at his elbow.  With my other hand, I reached to turn his hand over.  Realizing what I wished, he flipped his palm up in one of those blindingly fast, disconcerting moves of his.  It startled me; my fingers froze on his arm for a brief second.
  "Sorry," he murmered.  I looked up in time to see his golden eyes close again.  "It's too easy to be myself with you."
  I lifted his hand, turning it this way and that as I watched the sun glitter on his palm.  I held it closer to my face, trying to see the hidden facets in his skin.
  "Tell me what you're thinking," he whispered.  I looked to see his eyes watching me, suddenly intent.  "It's still so strange for me, not knowing."

31 comments:

Dangrdafne said...

"Tell me what you're thinking," he whispered. I looked to see his eyes watching me, suddenly intent. "It's still so strange for me, not knowing."

"I am thinking you are the most beautiful thing I have ever seen in this world." Bella stated softly. Edward smiled a dazzingly smile at Bella and said "I could say the same about you."

Edward then leaned closer to Bella and lightly placed his lips to hers. The coolness of his skin sent goosebumps up and down Bella's arms. Bella whimpered as she felt her heart pump faster and felt the blush rising in her cheeks. Edward pulled back, smiled again and said "I love that color on you."

Bella overcome with feeling placed her hands on either side of Edward's face, moved closer to him and then kissed him passionately. There was no fear. This is what they both wanted and there was no denying it now.

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

oh bum done it again

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

Bella overcome with feeling placed her hands on either side of Edward's face, moved closer to him and then kissed him passionately. There was no fear. This is what they both wanted and there was no denying it now.

"Bella" Edward said hoarsely "I know this is what we want but is it right to do it now"
Oh hell I thought what do I say to a God because that's what he was to me, a beautiful angel or devil sent to torment my dreams and my reality...I looked back at him, he was still watching me from mere inches away, his eyes moving from mine to my lips and back again. The air felt charged, I swear I could taste the ozone in the air. His hand slid over mine, cold against warm making me shiver..
"Well Bella, tell me"...my god spoke and I felt my body react to his velvet tones.
"I, I don't know what to say, what's happening Edward, can you feel it too" I stuttered out
He slid my hand along his thigh, my eyes followed and then I swallowed slowly.
What seemed to be a huge bulge in his trousers had appeared...maybe he had the cock of a god too I mused.
A laugh escaped me and Edwards eyes seemed to bore into mine...huskily he asked "What do you find so funny Bella dear, surely this doesn't make you want to laugh?" My hand was now pressed onto the hardest cock I had ever and was ever likely to feel in my life.
I gripped him without thinking and moved my hand up and down his length, Edwards head tilted back and a low growl like that of an animal left his perfect lips..lips I wanted to melt on to.
With a movement so quick no eye could see, I was on my back, Edward on top of me pushing his cock into my thigh.
"God I want you" he said,
I could see the venom on his teeth and whispered "Edward I don't know if this a good idea or not can you control yourself?"
I yelped as suddely my jeans were ripped from my body.."Lets see just what I'm capable of shall we Bella".
My heart almost stopped and for a moment I felt how a vampires heart must feel....
"Bella" my god growled as his lips met mine...
There was no turning back this time, no doubts at all in either of our minds

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

I posted this as Dafs did so I deleted then mixed it in as best I could as don't have time to write another out yet lol

Dangrdafne said...

@Nibbles - No I am sorry. When I saw no one had posted, I took a chance that no one was around and tried my hand at the story before it got to a point that I couldn't write anything (being at work and all). The cool part? I have the comment that you deleted in my email, so I got both of your "chapters"!! wee hee for me!

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

lol awww i just been busy i will try again later lol

Stan said...

WOOOO!! My New Moon DVD has been posted out! Just thought I'd share! Hope everyone is ok today xx

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

Sleepy but good lol

TwiWeasel said...

@ Stan - Great idea! I like starting with the actual book! Of course, we will corrupt these innocent characters before too long, won't we?

@ Daf - Wonderful addition! Glad you could join in before it gets too...um...out of control! Your part was written almost exactly like SM writes!

@ Nibbles - Yours is sooooooo not how SM writes! LOL That's not a bad thing!

NO time to actually write right now...I'll do my best in a few hours!

Dangrdafne said...

YIKES - TwiWeasel you are getting me in trouble today - just as I was laughing at your comment about how I wrote like SM and Nibbles did not, my boss pops in and says 'What's so funny?" Aaaaiiiggg luckily I just pulled a banana from my lunch bag (sounds like the start of a joke doesn't it?) and there was a sticker on it for MonkeyBall (who knew?) so I just told him about it. PHEW!! LMAO!

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

monkey ball pmsl

TwiWeasel said...

@ Daf - I bet your boss thinks you have one strange sense of humor! LOL! Sorry to get you in trouble *snicker*
WTF is Monkey ball? I've heard of Donkey Ball, but not Monkey Ball!. We have a Donkey Ball fundraiser once a year here. (Basketball played on the backs of donkeys if you weren't sure.)

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

As his hard marble lips met my soft pliant ones I fleetingly wondered how it would feel when I was the same as him until my blood literally began to boil, my head was spinning and as I went limp against the ground Edward groaned "Belllaaaaa, you have to breathe, why do you forget to breathe; you're not a vampire yet!"
His face swam in front of me, dots of black danced across my vision, I was so stupid, Gah!
" I'm sorry Edward " I said lamely, "I just forget when I'm with you"
His smile was beautiful and I nearly forgot about the breathing part again. I shook my head and Edward frowned at me, then a sly grin slid over his face.
I eyed him warily "What?"
"I want to try something Bella and I want you to remain perfectly still"..he laughed, a low throaty sound "for as long as you can at least"
I had pushed myself up on to my elbows and watched, my eyes growing wider by the second as his hands roamed over my thighs and down my legs, goosebumps trailing after his touch
"What are you doing"
"Hush" he said that lopsided smile crepping slowly across his lips.
He sank down in the grass his face over my stomach, he was blowing little puffs of cold air across my belly making me gasp. His smile hitched a little higher and his long tongue shot out like a snakes to dip into my belly button.
"Oh Bella you're skin tastes so good, I want to eat you up"
He looked up at me from beneath his lashes "Breathe Bella, please don't forget, I'd like you conscious for this"
He kissed my belly, moving slowly down my body across to each hip..my hips moving involuntarily, he peeked up at me again and I felt my core begin to melt.
Those cold, cold kisses were making me hotter than hell on hot summers day...his hands spread my legs as I stammered out "Edward...n..no"
"Oh Bella yes" he breathed as his head dropped and I felt the cold tip of his tongue touch my swollen clit. I swear I heard a sizzle as if water dropped into a hot pan and I cried out when that tongue slipped between my wet folds and slid up and down, up and down before he thrust it into me.
My hands went to my hair, it was too much, so cold, so cold, as he withdrew I grasped his hair in contradiction of whaty my mind told me and begged "More... please Edward"
I could feel his grin as he slid his fingers into me, such, long, artistic fingers playing me so well as they moved slowly in and out. Edwards tongue began to circle my clit, I was buzzing,moaning incoherently, clutching his hair pulling him into me/ My hips began to move in time and I felt myself become wetter than I ever thought possible.
"Bella, your scent is delicious, you taste better than I imagined"
I couldn't answer as edward added another finger and he stareted biting, nibbling my swollen bud. His thrusting fingers curled inside me reaching places I'd not managed in my own self pleasuring, I stuffed my fist in my mouth to stop from yelling out, wave after wave of pleasure shot through me, he tongue relentlessly flicking and circling my clit.He felt my muscles tighten around him and he whispered "Cum for me Bella" and thrust into me once more as I let go and poured myself over his fingers and tongue.
I swear I must have passed out but a gentle lapping brought me round, edward was still between my milky white thighs, licking me clean. "I can't help it, you taste too good", I could feel my self start to tingle all over and he looked up at me as if to say shall I go again.
I pushed him away, no mean feat I tell you and said "Oh no Edward Cullen, its my turn now"

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

Ok, long one (excuse me lol) sorry but I thought I better get a good lemon in, in case i can't later

Dangrdafne said...

@ TwiWeasel - Apparently MonkeyBall...oops make that Super MonkeyBall... is a Wii game. It was advertised on a sticker on my banana. That is all I know.

Jelena @ Twiholic said...

I cannot participate. I need to channel all my creative energies into writing my massive chapter 10. And I need to wash my hair tonight - which believe me, is always a task that requires a few hours, because I've got so much of it, that hairdressers always say it's enough for two heads, LoL.

TwiWeasel said...

Oh, wow...Nibs that was...wow. Gimme a sec to see what I can do with that...back in a few.

TwiWeasel said...

I pushed him away, no mean feat I tell you and said "Oh no Edward Cullen, its my turn now"

Once he caught the glint in my eye, he allowed himself to be pushed and prodded till he lay on his back in the grass. He smirked up at me as I bit my lip, unsure of how to proceed. I was so inexperienced…I know what I want to do, but I’m not sure how to go about it.

I moved around him, till I was settled between his legs, sitting on my knees. I could feel the slight breeze touching me where his tongue was only moments before, and a blush crept up my face. Ignoring it, I trailed my fingers from his hips to his knees and back up to his waist. I moved my hands up under his shirt and heard his breath hitch. Gaining confidence from his positive reaction, I popped the button open on his trousers and unzipped the fly before I could stop myself. My hands were on his abdomen, moving around to his back and down his legs, pushing his pants down as I went. He raised his hips to help me, but other than that remained still.

I cocked an eyebrow at him when I realized that he wasn’t wearing anything under his trousers, and he just shrugged at me, a small smile playing on his lips. I leaned down to him, brushing my cheek against the velvet covered steel of his erection, and I heard his sharp intake of breath. Turning my head, I breathed a kiss onto the tip of his penis before opening my mouth and sliding it down all the way.

It was so cold! Almost like a popsicle…an Edward flavored popsicle. I humm’d my amusement at that thought around his stiff cock and I heard him groan. “Bella, your mouth is so hot.” He whispered as his hand tangled in my hair. “Amazing…” he trailed off as I began to move and suck.

TwiWeasel said...

Sorry, I ran out of time...gotta get back to work! Laters!

Jelena @ Twiholic said...

Wow Nibbs, yes, what Wease said. Have you considered writing an actual fan fic?

TwiWeasel said...

@ Nibs - Yes! I agree with Jelena! You should! (Can I beta?) LOL

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

@Jelly...mmm and no, I think I should then I go off on a tangent, I'm easily distracted. I have a way with words sometimes lol. I kinda did something like this years ago in virtual places, something like fanfic but more just general erotic writing ooo boy that was hot anyone else gonna go else I'll have one more turn before I have to leave the computer cos my eyes are melting!

Becky said...

You ladies are on fine form tonight!! Those posts were just..well.. hot!! I shouldn't be reading this with the kids still up, lol! BBL.

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

It was so cold! Almost like a popsicle…an Edward flavored popsicle. I humm’d my amusement at that thought around his stiff cock and I heard him groan. “Bella, your mouth is so hot.” He whispered as his hand tangled in my hair. “Amazing…” he trailed off as I began to move and suck. Up and down I moved my mouth, unsure of what to do but going by instinct, my hair trailed across his thighs and he groaned "So soft" to the meadow, I reached my hand between his thighs to cup his balls, couple o' snow balls I mused and hummed again sending vibrations along his cock. I was met with a moan of approval..as my mouth slid back up his ice pole I snaked my tongue around him licking up to the tip to dip my tongue into the opening, I could taste him, so sweet, like wild honey, as i licked up and down his shaft I marvelled at home big he was and still growing, longer, thicker, I imagined him pushing it into me, thrusting harder, pounding my flesh, my imagination was working overtime as juices dripped from me. I continued licking and sucking, swirling my tongue around the head of his cock, I'd gripped him in my small hand and was surprised I couldn't get my fingers to meet, I followed my mouth with my hand, moving up and down...edwards hips began to push up "Ican smell you" he said "you're driving me insane". I sucked him in as far as I could go then swallowed so he hit the back of my throat, his hands grabbed handfuls of my hair, tangling in it, holding my head "is this ok" he asked tentatively and as I hummed my reply he grunted and began to thrust into my mouth, I moved my tongue around him as he fucked my mouth, my soft lips tight around his huge, cold cock. He kept thrusting deeper, harder, I didn't think I could take anymore as he grunted "Oh fuck Bella" and pulled out of me,he turned as his body shook with orgasm, his eyes rolling back in his head as he growled his release.

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

"Edward" I was pouting "I wanted to taste you"
"Bella, I couldn't I don't know what that amount of venom could do to you!"
"But how can we have sex then?" I huffed
He held up a finger and jumped up doing his pants up swiftly, on his cell all at once it seemed talking hurredly. I lay back thinking how am I going to get home with no jeans?
At once Edward was back "Who were you talking to Edward" I asked
"Carlisle a aand Alice" he frowned..then I heard a tinkling laugh echo round the meadow and a light voice carried over the clearing "Don't let him rip these off you Bella, they cost $500"
Edward ran back to me with a pair of D&G jeans hanging over his arm and a smirk hanging on his lips.
"What" I asked again
!I started something Bella and I mean to finish it, Carlisle said its not a problem, my venom from my um you know um penis won't change you"
"Oh" I replied looking puzzled "Oh" I smiled as I realised what he was saying "Are you ready to , I mean don't you have to..." My eyes trailed to the very prominent bulge in his pants and I grinned "I guess not" and laid back in the grass.
I opened my legs and spread my lips wide while his eyes darkened at the sight of me
"That smell, your smell, it maddens me, you have no idea what you do to me Bella"
I smiled and kept my eyes on him as i dipped my finger into my wet, hot hole and smeared my honey over my clit and lips, my already swollen bud sensitive making me gasp. His eyes widened and I swear I saw his cock twitch as I stroked myself, dipping in everytime I passed down.
With a snarl, he was out of those jeans quicker than quick and hovering over me. " Bella" he warned "You have to tell me if I hurt you in anyway"
"I want you to fuck me Edward" and pushed my soaking pussy up to his rock hard cock "now"
Without a word, the coldest, biggest cock I would ever know roughly pushed into me, I yelled my pleasure to the wind and Alice's laugh echoed back, "Play nice edward" she shouted, she doesn't know everything about you yet"...

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

I couldn't do it as one post, blogger said I was too big for it-pouts

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

Ok I'm outta here I'm going fic blind lol, see you tomorrow for our beckys FFF-its a doozie lol

TwiWeasel said...

@ Nibs - too big, LOL! That's what SHE said! Great addition!

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

blogger can't handle me baby, I'm too much for it pmsl see ya sweetie x

Mrs. P @ TwiBite said...

wow!!! This was awesome ladies. Nibbles...you need to try your hand at a fan fic yourself. I have no creativity tonight, at all...but I loved reading it.

Stacked Like Sookie said...

Fanning myself here @Nibbles! Hot is not the word! !'m having a two year old temper tantrum here coz we don't get NM until April 14...grrrr