Thursday, 25 February 2010

Community Fan-Fic Thursday...again

Good Morning Ho's , it's that time again *evil grin* So dig into your imaginations (god help us all) and lets see what we can come up with again :)

Firstly some of my fave sex hair pics of the one and only Rob

 
  
  
  
  

No need for captions, it's all in the hair
And your starting point for today is............................................


Being a fragle little human was beginning to take it's toll on bella's libido. There was no way Edward would go any further than kissing and a little over the clothes fondling. As nice as it was it left her wanting more, a lot more. This affected her moods in a major way and she was beginning to become unbearable to be around. So much so Alice pulled her to one side to confront her for being such a snarky cow....
                                                                             

60 comments:

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

Just gotta say pics 1,4 & 5 oh God I can see my fingers tangled in that hair already-sigh....

So much so Alice pulled her to one side to confront her for being such a snarky cow...

"Bella! You have got to stop this, I know you're fristrated but damn girl, you ever heard of manual manipulation?" exclaimed Alice

Bella hung her head and Alice suddenly squeeked
"Well if you have one of those why don't you use it?"

Bella flushed and whispered "I can't use a vibrator I'm a virgin, my mum bought it for me....I want Edward to take my virginity not a piece of plastic"

" But a piece of marble will suffice" Alice laughed
Bella blushed a deeper shade of red and Alice said "I gotta get out of here, your colour is driving me crazy"
As she skipped out the phone rang, Bella answered with a sigh "Hello"
"Woah" said Jacob "What's with the sigh, anything I can do to help?"
"No, well yes, but no, I can't, look can you meet me, I need to talk about something, it's embarrassing-see you on the beach in 15minutes"
Bella grabbed her jacket and headed out to her truck...

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

er for fristrated read frustrated lol

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

As she drove to La Push, thoughts of Edward swam in her brain, visions of them both touching, kissing, so close to doing the deed clouded her vision and as she shook her head she stomped on the brakes and screamed.
Jake jumped out of the way lithely a look of concern on his face
"Fuck Bella, what's with you"

Shaking and beginning to cry Bella fell out of
the truck into Jakes arms "I'm so sorry, so sorry"

Walking wrapped around each other to their tree Jake asked "Come on Bells whats up, what can I do?
Bella peeked up at him blushing and said"You can't really do anything so don't get any idea's while I tell you whats going on"

Bella sat blushing & fidgeting and explained how she and Edward were close to getting it on, Jake grimmaced but kept quiet.
"So" she said "What can I do, I have a vibrator but don't want to use it and I don't really know how to um get myself off....I don't want you to do anything so stop thinking that right away Jake" mumbled Bella

Jake looked thoughtful then grabbed her hand and said "Come on, we're going to see a friend of mine; don't worry, She's cool"....

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

Ok thtas it for now byeeeeeee lol

Stan said...

Sorry Ho's, I'm feeling under the weather today, think I've caught what H had last week. I've justread about 3 blogs and couldn't muster a single comment, going to take some painkillers and sit this one out I think, will be watching though. Off to move the puter to a comfier location and read fic for the day.

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

Poor Stan, whiskey & hot lemonade make you feel better!!

Anonymous said...

Jake looked thoughtful then grabbed her hand and said "Come on, we're going to see a friend of mine; don't worry, She's cool"....

With that Jake took Bella to his Rabbit, and opened the car door.
"Get in the back seat Bella," he demanded, and Bella obeyed. Jake entered the car and made Bella scoot over in the back seat.
"I thought we were going to go see some female friend of yours," said Bella.

"Yes, say hello to Janice...my penis," as Jacob whipped his dick out of his pants.




Feel better stan! Hope I made you laugh...XOXOXO

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

Rofl Mrs P, I was trying to develop a story line towards lesbianism you know medicine woman with heap big clitoral stuimulation toy collection etc etc, pmsl, you crack me- helllllooooooooooooooooooo Janice!

Stan said...

OMG! Laugh? Yep, just a bit lol!!

Anonymous said...

PMSL...The "Don't worry, she's cool" was too tempting.

Nessa Lomiva said...

LMAO, Mrs.P.

Okay...

"Yes, say hello to Janice...my penis," as Jacob whipped his dick out of his pants.

"Jake! NO!" Bella screamed in disgust. "What's wrong with you?"

"Well, you sounded frustrated, so I thought I'd relieve some of the tension for you." Jacob shrugged. "Don't you want me to?" He looked into her eyes.

"Jake," Bella said gently, "I want Edward, not you. Using you to poke around my body wouldn't be that much different than using a vibrator." She blushed.

"What?!!! How can you fucking say that? Comparing my dick to vibrator. Jesus fuck, Bella, you really are inexperienced and know shit when it comes to pleasure."

"Go to hell, Jacob!" Bella stormed out of the car, slamming the door behind her and went home.

Frustrated and confused, Bella retired to her room. Would it really be so bad to relieve some of this tension with Jacob, she thought to herself.

"Hello beautiful," a wonderful, soothing voice made her raise her head.

TigerlilyRose said...

Sorry ho's will have to join later, at work with the hubtard and he is SUCH a slave driver. Plus I can never remember my password and his fucking omputer neverlets me in to google. We will see if this will even post.

Be back this afternoon to contribute to the depravity!

TigerlilyRose said...

well it let me post but it didn't edit my typo's...LMAO oh well

mrsjbreen said...

Okay...I am in..here is my freshman attempt...

"Hello beautiful," a wonderful, soothing voice made her raise her head.

Bella looked up and was suprised to see Jasper emerge from the dark shadows of her room.

"I understand you are having a bit of a problem," Jasper purred.

"Gah, what, um no, I am fine," Bella stuttered.

"Bella, this is nothing to be embarrassed about. Alice told me about your little problem, and I am here to help."

"Um..what??? I don't think..." Bella stammered.

"Bella,all we are talking about here is a little 'self love,' ok? Clearly you aren't comfortable with it, but I can fix that."

"What, make me feel all warm and fuzzy about getting myself off?"

"Precisely."

"While you watch?"

"Uh huh," Jasper barely whispered into her ear. Bella flushed as she didn't remember him moving so close to her. Bella suddenly felt a surge of confidence, and if she was being honest, a surge of something else down below.

Without saying another word, other than a mental 'oh fuck it,' she leaned over into her nightstand drawer and grabbed her vibrator. She quickly stripped off her clothes and, although she was definitely feeling warm and fuzzy, she still modestly crawled under her covers before beginning.

Two queefs and an orgasm later, Bella marveled that she had been able to lose herself so completely in her "self love."

Suddenly, she realized that while she had stopped, her mattress was still in motion. "What the fuck?" she queried as she realized she was not alone in the bed!

"Ungh.., almost there, don't stop now." a husky voice grunted.

Bella whipped back the covers and gasped at what she saw....

twilightcupcake said...

"Ungh.., almost there, don't stop now." a husky voice grunted.

Bella whipped back the covers and gasped at what she saw....

There on the other side of the bed, as far away from her as possible, lay Edward. She saw his face contorted into an expression of almost pain. He was staring at her with the darkest look in his eyes. She had never seen such lust before but it made her reach down into her panties again.

The motion from his side of the bed resumed and she now dared to look at where it was coming from. Edward had his pants unzipped and his hand wrapped around his cock, rubbing it so quickly that she could barely make out the shape of his hand.

She had never seen a penis before but marvelled at the size and shape of his. Like everything else about Edward she thought it was beautiful but also wondered if THAT was supposed to fit inside of her.

Edward followed Bella's eyes to see she was gaping at his cock. Her mouth was open with an expression of awe and then she started biting on her lower lip as her hand began moving underneath her panties. Not wanting to frighten her, he tried to pull the covers back over himself but she stopped him.

"No, I want to see you. You're beautiful," she said.

Excited that she was now watching him he moved his hand even faster "I couldn't help myself. I saw what Jasper was thinking and came in to intervene. But when I saw you on the bed I just had to touch myself. It's taken every ounce of my strength not to touch you. I want so badly to taste your juices Bella. You smell so good but I know that I won't be able to stop and I might hurt you."

"I don't know about that Edward. It might not taste good," said Bella. She saw that his cock was swelling even more and also had some shininess now at the tip.

"Edward, can I taste you? Please? I want to feel you in my mouth."

Against his better judgement Edward knew he couldn't stop her. He had been dreaming of having her suck his cock ever since he had watched her sleep that first night in her bedroom.

He stopped moving his hand and used it to hold his cock still. She leaned over and slowly started licking the pre-cum off the tip. It was like licking the best ice cream - he tasted like smooth rich french vanilla. She tentatively reached out and ran her fingers along the side of his cock. It felt so cold yet smooth as marble. He jerked his hips forward reflexively but managed to still himself again but he had startled her.

"Don't stop Bella. I'm so close," said Edward.

Anonymous said...

"Ungh.., almost there, don't stop now." a husky voice grunted.

Bella whipped back the covers and gasped at what she saw....

....There was Jacob with Janice in his hand, trying desperately to rub one off while watching Bella masterbate.

"JACOB! How did you get in here?" she asked.
"Through the window," he moaned.
"Do you do that...often?" She inquired.
"Just the past couple of months," he confessed, shooting his sperm from Janice and sending it launching across the room.

Bella could hear it slap as it landed. She turned to see the disgusted and angry face of none other than...

Anonymous said...

Dammit!!!!!! TC and I were here at the same time. Guess we can ignore mine and my Janice. So sad....LOLOL!

TwiWeasel said...

@ fanficzombie - "two queefs and an orgasm later..." I just about pissed myself laughing. And I'm at work for fucks sake!!

@ Mrs.P - You have something you'd like to tell us about...Janice?

Nessa Lomiva said...

Well I just wrote like five fucking paragraphs, continuing where TC left off, and this shit of a blogger ate my comment. Asshole! I'm sorry, but I'm just not writing up again.

Nessa Lomiva said...

Since, I think, Mrs.P. and TC already posted simultaneously before, I'm going with TC this time.

He stopped moving his hand and used it to hold his cock still. She leaned over and slowly started licking the pre-cum off the tip. It was like licking the best ice cream - he tasted like smooth rich french vanilla. She tentatively reached out and ran her fingers along the side of his cock. It felt so cold yet smooth as marble. He jerked his hips forward reflexively but managed to still himself again but he had startled her.

"Don't stop Bella. I'm so close," said Edward.

Bella opened her mouth wider and sucked Edward's cock deeper in.

Edward moaned loudly, and this only propelled Bella to push him further in, licking his tip vigorously. Her finger played with his balls, pinching and pulling them gently.

"Oh shit," Edward spat through his mouth as his sperm shot deep into Bella's warm throat. She swallowed every last drop before releasing him.

"Are you okay?" With his hands, Edward pulled Bella's face to his, with a worried look in his eyes.

"Perfect." She smiled wickedly.

"I'm so relieved. The reason why I wouldn't have sex with you was because I was worried my semen was poisonous, like the rest of the juices in my body." He said with obvious relief in his voice. "Have you done this before?" He couldn't stop himself from asking, even though he knew the affirmative answer would send him into a jealous rage.

"No," Bella lowered her eyes and flushed. "Why, was I bad?"

"No!" Edward laughed and kissed the top of her head. "You were amazing, that's why."

Still laying under the covers, both Edward and Bella could suddenly hear an angry growl coming from somewhere in the room. Their heads resurfaced only to find...

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

Charlie standing in the doorway "what the fuck are you doing with my daughter and who is he?"
As one Edward and Bella turned to see Jasper looking a sheepish as a vamp could doing his trousers back up.
"Um I'm gonna leave" Jasper said walking as slowly as he could past Charlie releasing feel good vibes as he left.

"Er Dad, um, we weren't doing anything really, nothing to worry about I'm still a virgin" She said sadly
"I better go to Bella, I'll be back later" whispered Edward.
Oh no Edward" Charlie spat " I wanna talk about this, what are your intentions with my daughter, when is the wedding?"

"Wwww wedding Dad" stuttered Bella

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

Sorry ill, flying visit, going to crash now Xxxx great stuff loved reading it

TigerlilyRose said...

Still laying under the covers, both Edward and Bella could suddenly hear an angry growl coming from somewhere in the room. Their heads resurfaced only to find...

Rosalie! with her teeth bared growling at Bella. "Edward, how can you keep coming back to this...this...thing!"

"Rose, Please. This is none of your business." Edward said, trying to stay calm, but quickly losing his patience.

"Our family is all of our business. And trust me Bella is BAD for business! But here you are watching her queef and cum and letting her suck your cock like she is one of us! Wake up Edward!" Rosalie Spat at Bella, her venomous saliva just barely missing her target.

Edward was up on his feet in front of Bella before Bella even knew what was happening.

"Rose, come on. Leave them be and lets go home." Emmett said from the doorway. Rosalie turned and hissed at her mate. "You aren't going me and you aren't going to bother Edward and Bella anymore tonight either." Emmett slid between Edward and Rosalie and said to Edward. "Maybe you should stay out tonight. You know how Rose is when she gets riled."

"Yeah, brother. Just get her out of here, now!" Edward said. "We'll talk about this tomorrow, Rose!"

After they left, Edward turned to Bella. "I am so sorry. Rose is just...jealous..."

"Why would Rosalie be jealous of me? She is so beautiful and she has Emmett, what more could she want?"

"Well...ummm...you see...before...before you the three of us were, well...we were a threesome." If he could have turned red he would have. He hung his head and looked at Bella, praying she wouldn't hate him.

TigerlilyRose said...

Crap Nibs and I were on the same time...oh well pick one and go with it!

Nessa Lomiva said...

LMAO! Well, geez, the traffic Bella's room gets. Great posts both from Nibbles and TL. I wouldn't know who to choose if I was the one continuing. =)

mrsjbreen said...

I think we each need to start doing a pre post post saying we are writing in process with a post update deadline...LOL!

This is kind of like those books I remember as a kid...I don't remember what they were called, but you would pick different paths to take at the end of each chapter and each time you read the same book the story was different.

Hell, as long as they are all shmexy times, I say win win WOOT!!

Nessa Lomiva said...

@FFZombie - I think they were called "Choose your own ending". That's a great idea about posting info your reply is in progress.

Anonymous said...

*peeks from behind the corner* Nice work Ladies! I could read this all day! But then I'd need a fan to cool down! WTG!
xoxo

StarlitViolets said...

"Choose Your Own Adventure" books! I used to LOVE those things. But I always cheated and went back if the character died a horrific death or negative consequences came his way. Hee hee.

Okay - good work, ladies. I'm going to continue TLR's, cuz Nibbles got a few in alreay and TigerLily hasn't yet.

So - here's my fair warning to everyone - I'm writing now, so wait for my comment to follow with some more Bella-lovin.

twilightcupcake said...

SLV - I use to do the same thing with those books. I was such a cheater! waiting for your write up...
(great idea ffz about the pre post post)

StarlitViolets said...

"Why would Rosalie be jealous of me? She is so beautiful and she has Emmett, what more could she want?"

"Well...ummm...you see...before...before you the three of us were, well...we were a threesome." If he could have turned red he would have. He hung his head and looked at Bella, praying she wouldn't hate him.

Bella just stared at Edward, contemplating the implications of what he'd just divulged.

"Bella, love?" Edward said, kneeling beside the bed and gazing into her eyes.

Bella's face gave away her emotions as she ran through them. First to appear was utter shock. Her lack of sexual experience hadn't prepared her for the thought that threesomes really occurred. And for Edward to have been so close to Rosalie's perfection.... How could she possibly compete with that?!

"Love," Edward repeated, "It ended long ago. I have no desire to be with anyone but you. You are the one who just smoked my pole like a fucking pro! You are the one who has my heart."

Bella felt her anger well up inside her next. "What the hell, Edward! I can't be with you and know we're so out of balance sexually."

"What do you want me to do? I'll do anything to fix this."

Bella's next emotion was curiosity. What could Edward do to make this situation better? Maybe she needed a little girl-action, herself. Maybe...

A knock at her door told Bella that Alice had already seen what the two of them would be doing together in front of Edward to even the playing field, and Bella was suddenly VERY excited and VERY wet.

twilightcupcake said...

Okay ladies, I'm going to write a turn before I go for school pickup. SLV you naughty girl ;)

Cake That Nikki said...

Loving your work ladies lol. WTF is a qeef? Huge hugs for stan and nibbles hope you both feel better soon xxx

TwiWeasel said...

@ Mary - OMG, I just disolved into giggles that ended in a huge coughing fit! I had to go get a drink and take some deep breaths to recover. (I also got some strange looks from the coworkers.)

Anyhoo...round these parts, a queef would be a pussy fart. I wonder if it means something different somewhere else?

twilightcupcake said...

A knock at her door told Bella that Alice had already seen what the two of them would be doing together in front of Edward to even the playing field, and Bella was suddenly VERY excited and VERY wet.

Alice walked in and pushed Edward back onto the bed.
"You better go lie down sweetie. We wouldn't want you to lose control," Alice smirked.
Edward looked a little stunned but did as he was told and went to go sit on the bed and leaned back on the headboard. He had never imagined Bella would dare to try something so adventurous.

Bella bit her lower lip again and looked up at Alice through her lashes "Alice, I don't know what I'm doing. Will you show me?"

Alice turned to Bella and cupped Bella's face between her hands and kissed her lips gently.
"Don't worry dearie. I've got lots of practice and I think you'll be a quick learner."

The girls continued giving each other slow kisses on the lips. Eventually Bella felt the tip of Alice's tongue peek into her mouth. Bella opened her mouth in response and met Alice's tongue with her own. Alice tasted like the sweetest caramel and Bella couldn't help but push herself deeper to devour her friend.

Edward watched as the two girls began running their hands down each others backs and then slowly other each others breasts. Alice felt Bella's nipples harden as she lightly brushed over them. It had been so long since Alice had tasted the flesh of a human - she couldn't wait to get Bella's clothes off.

Alice slowly kissed her way down Bella's jaw and down her neck, just tracing her tongue over Bella's pulsing carotid before she kissed the hollow of her throat. Edward's breath caught as he watched his sister venture where he still dared not go.

He felt himself living vicariously through Alice's hands as she slowly unbuttoned Bella's blouse, kissing her way down her flesh. With Bella just in her plain nude bra Alice clucked her tongue.
"Bella love, we're going to have hit Agent Provocateur with you when we're through today. They have a wonderful dressing room too, don't they Edward?" said Alice, winking at her brother.
Edward's eyes darkened and his hand couldn't help but move quickly to grip the already swollen cock that he'd already brought out of his jeans. He groaned and rolled his head back urging the girls to continue.

Alice turned back to see Bella undoing her bra and throwing it to the floor. Bella couldn't wait to feel Alice's mouth on her and Alice knew it. Alice cupped one of Bella's breasts in each hand and slowly flicked Bella's left nipple with her tongue. She blew a whisper of cold air onto it and watched as the nipple perked up. Bella moaned and gripped Alice's hair and pushed Alice's face against her breast again. Needing no more encouragement Alice took Bella's nipple into her mouth and sucked and flicked the human flesh until it was taut. Bella had never thought she would find being with a woman so exciting but her body had other plans. She felt the wetness growing between her legs.
Alice and Edward both smelled the scent of the juices right away and Alice immediately thrust her hand inside Bella's panties. She slowly traced up and down Bella's slit with one finger and resisted the urge to push deeper into the virgin human flesh. Bringing her hand up she saw that her finger was coated with the most glorious honey.
"Edward sweetheart, do you want to come over and have a taste?" Alice beckoned her brother over and Bella couldn't help but be grateful for her friends boldness.

(Okay, off to pick up the kids from school)

Anonymous said...

Hey ladies! Response in progress...

StarlitViolets said...

Nice job TC!!! Wow! I like that Bella's not a complete whore in this week's. Her innocence is a bit endearing. However, we are taking it away slowly. Oh yes, she will be deflowered by the end. I can feel it.

@Stan - I hope you feel better soon, babe! We'll make sure to keep you entertained with CFF here. :)

@Nibbles - Feel better soon too! And you still write great CFF when you're sick.

@Mary - What's a queef (pussy fart) called in your neck of the woods?

Anonymous said...

"Edward sweetheart, do you want to come over and have a taste?" Alice beckoned her brother over and Bella couldn't help but be grateful for her friends boldness

Edward walked slowly over to the two girls, and thrust Alice's fingers in his mouth. The taste caused his thirst for Bella to grow with intensity as he licked the honey from her fingers. Bella stood there as the feeling of delight slowly became replaced with fear...Edward's eyes began to turn black.

Bella started moving back from Edward, but he persued her. Edward brushed the hair from Bella's neck, and then took his hair in her hands. He held her tight and in lightening speed, he bit down on her throat.

twilightcupcake said...

dammit Mrs. P - she isn't Kristen - don't try to kill her too quick! JK - I'll let you guys keep going. I'm off to pick up the other kid.

mrsjbreen said...

Ok..I am jumping in..give me a few minutes...

mrsjbreen said...

Bella started moving back from Edward, but he persued her. Edward brushed the hair from Bella's neck, and then took his hair in her hands. He held her tight and in lightening speed, he bit down on her throat.

"Dammit Edward..what the fuck?" Alice screeched. "You are the damned masochist, not her. Do you think she is going to cum now with her veins burning on fire??"

Alice shoved Edward out of the way, jarring him from his trance. She reached over to Bella, who was now starting to visibly shake from the pain that was slowly coursing through her veins. Alice moved quickly and brought her lips to Bella's neck. Inwardly cursing her twatblocker of a brother, she starting sucking out the venom.

Edward watched in fascinated horror as the events unfolded. The tension in the room could be cut with a knife.

Suddenly, there was an eerie scratching against the window. It was dark and difficult to see what was out there. Alice slowly pulled away from Bella, and all three of them stared at the window, trying to make out what was there. They could all feel the air grow heavy with static. There was a creature out there, one more dangerous and mad then they could ever be. This creature had gone rogue some time ago, they thought they would never see it again... Edward's throat tightened as Alice screamed, "NO!!"

Bella was still in shock and slightly confused, but the intensity of the new arrival was not lost on her. "What is it Edward? What is out there?"

"It's...it's...THE CHIMPSTEN!!!"

mrsjbreen said...

Yeah, I went there...

And sorry that took so long and is a bit sloppy, my kids decided it was meltdown time and I just had to send as is! MUWAH!!

StarlitViolets said...

Okay FFZ - you screwed me on this one! What the HELL am I supposed to do with Chimpsten?!

Well - I'm off to try. So be warned. Be back in a few...

mrsjbreen said...

@starlitviolets...yeah, sorry about that. I guess I just got so caught up in the mania that is the return of Chimpsten I just couldn't resist! I know you will kick ass with it!

Stacked Like Sookie said...

Thank god I wasn't the only one who didn't know what a queef was @Mary! No I'm not contributing, my shopping list is about the extent of my writing abilities. Continue please
Btw we call it a fanny fart in Aus.

StarlitViolets said...

Bella was still in shock and slightly confused, but the intensity of the new arrival was not lost on her. "What is it Edward? What is out there?"

"It's...it's...THE CHIMPSTEN!!!"

Bella had never seen Edward or Alice so unnerved. It terrified her.

Just as the bloodthirsty, vampire-slaying Chimpsten began to claw its way in through Bella's window, a snarling broke through the night, shattering Chimpsten's concentration. Jacob, in wolf form, landed on all fours on Bella's bedroom floor with Chimpsten in his mouth. He snarled and bit and chewed, but Chimpsten refused to give in. And just when it looked like Jake was going to swallow her whole, Chimpsten did something she'd never done before... she spoke.

"Hey Assclown, I'm not your chew toy!" she said, clearly irritated at being slathered in wolf slobber.

StarlitViolets said...

FanFicZombie brought in Chimpsten and I couldn't turn it into something dirty. Sorry. Do with it what you will, girls.

mrsjbreen said...

Okay okay..Starlitviolets said that since I brought the Chimpsten in, I have to deal with this...ROTFLMAO....here goes...

mrsjbreen said...

"Hey Assclown, I'm not your chew toy!" she said, clearly irritated at being slathered in wolf slobber.

Suddenly, Bella's door flung open as Charlie came bounding back into the room, shotgun in hand. "What the FUCK is going on in here??" He took one look at the slobbering growling wolf, cocked his shotgun and fired.

Jake leaped out the window quick as a flash, narrowly avoiding the shotgun blast. Chimpsten, however, was not quite so lucky. While her head and torso remained intact, her bottom half appeared to be obliterated, now floating around the room like insignificant dust moats.

Edward, Alice and Bella were frozen in place as Charlie muttered, "Really, a sock puppet? What kind of kinky fuckery are you up to in here?"

Charlie started to storm back out of the room. He then looked down at the remains of Chimpsten, cocking his eyebrow. He quickly snatched up what was left of Chimpsten and retreated back to his bedroom, locking the door behind him.

StarlitViolets said...

Okay - here I go. Let's see what debauchery I can dream up...

StarlitViolets said...

He quickly snatched up what was left of Chimpsten and retreated back to his bedroom, locking the door behind him.

Alice was gone and back in the blink of an eye. Charlie had no idea he'd been caught in the act, but Alice had a wicked grin on her face that told Bella she'd put her camera phone to good use. Bella cringed at the idea of her father with a sock puppet, but then again, he'd just caught her with her pants unbuttoned, Alice kneeling before her, Edward with his hand on his cock, while they all stared at a giant wolf and a talking sock puppet. She figured they were even.

Alice stowed her phone and looked to Bella, "Maybe we should take Bella to our special place, Edward. We could show her some REAL fun, without having to worry about interruptions."

"Your special place? Are you saying YOU two have had a thing going too?!"

"No, Bella," Alice said soothingly. "It's just a little cabin in the woods that only Edward and I know about. We take turns using it as a getaway from all the prying vampire ears in our house."

"Oh," Bella replied, feeling foolish. "Can we take up where we left off, Alice?"

"Of course! But Edward is going to have to try and control himself or he's not allowed in," she said, looking pointedly at Edward.

"I'll be fine this time. I just wasn't prepared for the taste of Bella's honey before. I'll be in control this time," he said.

Bella jumped up and buttoned her jeans. "Let's go!"

Less than ten minutes later, they'd reached the cabin that was at least 20 miles away from the nearest house. Buried deep in the forest, the cozy little cabin had a fireplace, where Edward was now stoking a burgeoning flame, and in front of that was the softest, fluffiest rug Bella had ever felt.

Alice had gone back to the Cullen house to look for something.

Bella sat staring at Edward's back. Her eyes traveled toward his neck, and she suddenly had the urge to bite him. She jumped on his back, biting as hard as she could, knowing he would barely even feel pain from it. Bella had the satisfaction of feeling the the predator for once.

Edward turned to face her with speed and grace. Now they were both on their knees, facing each other, only lit by the fire's kindled flames. Gently, Edward cupped her neck with his hands, running them back into Bella's flowing hair. He tugged a little, pulling her head back, exposing her neck.

Bella's sharp intake of breath told Edward she liked it. He began to kiss her collar bone with small, soft kisses. His mouth moved up her neck, as his kisses became more confident and his desire more apparent. Next, he nibbled her earlobe lovingly and she let a small moan escape her lips. Suddenly, Bella dropped her chin and looked into Edward's eyes. She was ravenous with a hunger for him that she couldn't escape. She wanted him and only him and she wanted him now.

"Take me, Edward!" she cried. "I want you and I know you want me, please," she begged.

twilightcupcake said...

SLV - is it wrong that you are such a good writer and it's so fucking hot so far that I just want you to keep going? Yes, I can be lazy in bed...

Who's up next? I'll check back after dinner but no time now. It's getting good people.

Robs Bitch said...

OMG, you all are BRILLIANT! LOL!

StarlitViolets said...

@TwilightCupcake - THANKS! I really appreciate that. If nobody's updated in a few, I'll go again. I actually had to cut it short for dinner. But it makes me feel good that you like my writing. It's not the genre I usually write, but I do love to write as a hobby.

TigerlilyRose said...

Ok I am back, update in progress!

TigerlilyRose said...

"Take me, Edward!" she cried. "I want you and I know you want me, please," she begged.

The desire in her voice was more than he could take. He grabbed her up in a passionate kiss, so hard and fierce, Bella fear he might lose control again. But she didn't care, she just want Edward inside of her. touching her, making her feel that burning she had started to feel with Alice just a couple of hours before.

Edward regained enough control to lighten his lip lock on Bella and lay her down on the bear rug on the floor in front of the fire. H e practiced the greatest restraint he could muster as he stripped Bella of her clothes as slowly, with long languid movement that made Bella's skin feel like it was melting. As cold as Edward's marble skin was, she could feel the sexual heat steaming off of him.

She gasped as he trailed light kisses all the way down her belly, stopping to nip at her belly button. Bella was sure she was going to die from the burning in her loins before Edward got to making her a woman, let alone a vampire.

He eased her pants down over her hips, his cold marble hands leaving a trail of steam visibly streaming off of her skin. When his lips met her honeyed center he let out a sound that was a combination of a hiss and a moan. He began to lap at her creamy center, breathing in her scent and relishing the contact with her juices. Juices he had denied himself by not changing her.

He suddenly wondered why he was putting off the inevitable. he vowed that after this night, he was going to make her his, for eternity.

Bella bucked and screamed as the orgasm filled her body and overtook her soul. Edward reared up and trust his marble member into her mid-scream hoping the orgasm would soften the pain of his huge dick taking her virginity. She screamed even louder and began to wildly ride his throbbing rock. Her cries and movement drove Edward past his breaking point and he let loose of his seed inside of Bella.

Both lay there speechless for almost a hour, a tangle of limbs, listening to each other breathe and feeling the hot and cold of their bodies blend together.

StarlitViolets said...

Wow TigerLily!!! Great writing and oh so HOT! I think I may have to leave it there. That was BRILLIANT!!!

twilightcupcake said...

Um yeah. I can't top that TL. Okay, let's count that one as finished because I think we're all spent.

Nessa Lomiva said...

Fabulous writing everyone!

FFZ had me rolling on the floor with her Chimpsten and Charlie shit.

I didn't know TC was such a kinky girl, and me likey! =) And her writing is really playful.

SV and TL, you turned me on. Beautiful writing. Yes, I think we should leave at that. You did an amazing job taking Bella's virginity.

But I still wanna know what was up with Jake calling his dick Janice, LoL.

TigerlilyRose said...

@ SLV TC and Jelly...AHHHH you guys are gonna make me blush! Glad you all enjoyed it.