Thursday, 29 April 2010

Community FanFic Thursday - Time for Something Major!


Happy Thursday Ho's!  You know that can only mean one thing, it's Community FanFic day.  And while our good friend Nibbles bravely faces her surgery today, I think the bestway that we can show we're thinking of her is to give her a bloody good CFF for her to read while she recovers.  Good luck Nibs & wishing you a very speedy recovery :o).

Ok, so last week we started a character them with Jake - although I'm disappointed that I still didn't get to find out why his peen is called Janice *sigh*.  Anyway, this week I've decided that I'm going to dedicate our CFF to a character who doesn't always get to play a big part, so to speak, in fics.  I'm talking of course about...

 Jasper!  And not just any Jasper either, I'm talking Major Jasper Whitlock, the Civil War version.  So, let's go..

My ears pricked up as I thought I heard the sound of running water nearby.  I pulled on the reins to bring my horse, Vincent, to a halt, as I listened harder.  Yep, my ears weren't deceiving me, at long last!  I dug my feet into his sides to urge him on again, steering him toward the trees at the bottom of the slope on which we stood.

When we reached the bottom, we picked a path through the undergrowth, until it cleared and we found ourselves next to a wide, natural pool that had formed in the river.  Thankfully the opposite bank was under cover of trees too, the last thing I needed now was to be spotted when I'd done so well at getting away.

I dismounted Vincent and tethered him to the nearest tree, close enough to the water that he could drink.  Anticipation was building in me now as I watched the sweet, clear flowing water, suddenly extra aware of the grime and sweat that coated my skin.  I peeled off the thick layers of the top half of my uniform, discarding them in a heap on the floor, in too much of a hurry to get into the inviting water to fold them.  I sat to unlace my boots.  The action of pulling them off alone, was enough to make me sigh in ecstatic relief, so when I was finally naked and stepped into the cool water I was feling as though I'd died and one to heaven.  I slowly immersed myself in the water.  It was cold, but not unpleasantly so and I felt my body becoming quickly acclimatised to the temperature.  Floating gently on my back I was silent, listening to the sounds of nature all around, when suddenly I heard the crack of a branch snapping beneath somebody's foot on the opposite bank. 

I froze, then a figure came into view....




27 comments:

Becky said...

Oh I do love Jasper *sigh*. I have to go shopping for birthday presents, but will def be back later!

Oh, Nibbles wanted me to tell you all that she has taken Mini E to the hospital with her, lol.

Becky said...

Well you can certainly tell when Nibbles is gone, lol! I will have a go at adding something!

Mrs. P @ TwiBite said...

OK...I'm working here. Hang on...

Mrs. P @ TwiBite said...

I froze, then a figure came into view....

There, at the edge of the pond I saw her. Her long dress caught the branches of the low brush as she walked unknowingky towards the waters edge. She didn't know I was here. She didn't know I could see her. She didn't know how beautiful she was. I slowly let myself sink in the water trying desperately to float without making a splash, as she began to unbutton the top of her dress. She removed layer upon payer, until I could see her pale skin yearning for the cool relief of the water. Now I was in trouble. Now I am a bad boy. I should have let her know I was here, but it was already too late. She waded into the water and slowly turned in my direction. When her eyes met mine, she ...

Mrs. P @ TwiBite said...

Becky!!!!!!!!! DAMMIT!!!!!!!!!!!

Becky said...

Oh shit! I will have to think of something else now, lol.

Becky said...

@Mrs P . You wrote Jasper as a voyeur, I had Alice as a brazen hussy, lol.

Becky said...

Now I am a bad boy. I should have let her know I was here, but it was already too late. She waded into the water and slowly turned in my direction. When her eyes met mine, she ...

smirked at me. "I knew you were watching. Did you enjoy the show?" She quirked an eyebrow at me, challenging me to deny that I had been caught. Shit! No point trying to lie now.
"Yes very much, though I do apologise for not making you aware of my presence, it was very wrong of me." Well I was sort of sorry.
"Yes it was." She started to swim towards me, stopping about 6ft away. "I'm Alice Brandon by the way. Since you've seen me naked, you might aswell know my name." She didn't seem too upset, so I started to relax and introduced myself. "Jasper Whitlock". I was about to ask her more questions when we were interrupted..

"Alice? Alice? Where are you?"

Stan said...

PMSL at you two! Just got a text from Nibbles's husband, he said that the op went ok and she's back on the ward. Will let you know if I get any updates later.

Mrs. P @ TwiBite said...

Thank you stan!!! Way to go Nibbles!

Mrs. P @ TwiBite said...

Oooh Becky!!! I'm going to try again...I have an idea!

Mrs. P @ TwiBite said...

"Alice? Alice? Where are you?"

I couldn't see her anymore as she emersed herself completely in the water. I heard the trees rustle again as i wondered where Alice had gone. I could feel her brush up against me under the water, and then she came up behind me. Her mouth barely emerged from the water's edge as she whispered, "Shh...hide me. DOn't let them know I am here!"

I remained still in the water as Alice held on to my bare legs under the water. I saw a blond woman emerge from the trees, and I immediately let my presence be known; this time. "Morning Ma'am," I said, shocking the young lady. "My name is Jasper, please excuse me." The blonde was embarrassed at my naked state and quickly ran back into the forest. Alice emerged from behind me when the blonde was gone, and simply said, "Thank you Jasper," as she kissed me on my back. It was a light kiss, wet from her now drippping face, and I turned around and...

TigerlilyRose said...

OH HELL...I don't have time for this right now! Will be back this afternoon (evening across the pond) to share. Mrs P, why am I not surprised to see your avi all over this one...LOL

Be Back soon HOs!

Be good Nibs, no molesting the doctors and nurses while at the hospital! And get better VERY soon!

Mary said...

My turn

Mary said...

I remained still in the water as Alice held on to my bare legs under the water. I saw a blond woman emerge from the trees, and I immediately let my presence be known; this time. "Morning Ma'am," I said, shocking the young lady. "My name is Jasper, please excuse me." The blonde was embarrassed at my naked state and quickly ran back into the forest. Alice emerged from behind me when the blonde was gone, and simply said, "Thank you Jasper," as she kissed me on my back. It was a light kiss, wet from her now drippping face, and I turned around and...

blushed as I saw that she too was naked. I didn't know where to look but my gaze was drawn to her breasts. small but perfectly formed and dripping wet! I could feel myself getting hard at the sight of her.
Alice was staring at me and licking her incredibly red lips. Just then she reached out to touch my.........

TigerlilyRose said...

OOOOH finally....my turn!

Becky said...

Alice was staring at me and licking her incredibly red lips. Just then she reached out to touch my.........
.........cheek *sorry, lol*, tracing her delicate fingers slowly down to my mouth. As she moved softly over my lips I quickly sucked one of her fingers into my mouth, nibbling on the end. Her breath hitched slightly and I gently pulled on her wrist until she was almost flush against me. I let her finger go, and leaned in to kiss her perfect lips. My hand gripped the back of her head, tilting it slightly to gain better access. She moaned softly and shifted her hips on mine, causing my cock to rub up against her hot centre. She hooked one leg around my waist and Holy Fuck!......

Becky said...

Oh sorry, sorry! I had someone come to the door and I forgot to post it. I checked before aswell! Sorry!

Becky said...

Just ignore mine and we can go with @TLR's. :)

TigerlilyRose said...

Just then she reached out to touch my chest. Softly scrapping her nails down my skin, fingering the hair around my nipple. I grabbed her hand, pulling it from my chest and brought it to my lips, sucking her first two fingers in my mouth. I rolled my tongue around the digits, savoring her taste, gently suckling the tips. As I pulled her fingers out of my mouth, I slipped my other hand around her neck and pulled her to me, forcing her lips to mine with a hunger only a soldier away from women could understand. I devoured her lips fiercely, running my free hand down her sides and up around her breast, flicking the nipple a little.

"Do you know what is going on....Alice?" I asked. I bared my razor sharp teeth, licking my lips with anticipation of her taste. "I want you so badly. I will make you mine, forever." I realized she had no idea that I literally meant forever. Those I was running from were shape shifters, wolves, filthy dogs who lived to rip apart vampires. I would not have to run from them if there were two of us, I realized. With three of them and one of me I was sorely out numbered. But with this little imp, and her newborn fury, I could easily out smart them and take them out. The fact that she was the hottest little whore I have ever seen, didn't hurt either. "SHHHHHH, just relax, everything will be ok." I comforted as she started to ask a question.

I drew her back up to my lips, loving the scent of her flesh, her pulsing blood filling my senses with lust and wanting. I picked her up in my arms and waded out of the water to the bank. Laying her down upon a bed of moss, I looked over her perfect body. Perky tits, and a smoldering mound covered with dark curly hair.

"You are succulent, my darling Alice. I shall enjoy tasting you, feeling you, making you mine." I ran my hand down her sides, flicking her nipple as I moved my hands lower and lower to the center of her. Her cunt was slick with desire. Ah, so she wanted me too. That always made it go smoother. Her breath caught in her throat as I plunged my finger in to her folds, rolling her clit between my fingers. Hearing her gasp at my boldness, and feeling her pulse quicken. "My you are wet for me aren't you. Are you always so forward with me in the woods?" I asked, not really caring about the answer.




*****OK, so I got a little carried away, Sorry. Feel the urge to write today I guess and reading "The Claiming of Sleeping Beauty" last night has my smutty tendencies all a tither...LOL

TigerlilyRose said...

LMAO.... so funny Becky, we are on the same wave today, I see...nibbling fingers and all

Stan said...

LOL, I thought Becky & TLR's contributions went quite well together!

Had a text from Nibbles, she's alive but feels like death! Mini-E is in her bedside cupboard and I've sent her some Rob porn via text to cheer her up :o)

TigerlilyRose said...

@Stan Fabulous news...thanks for letting us know! Cheer up and recover soon Nibs! Definitely, noticeable when you are gone, my dears!

TigerlilyRose said...

let me have another go at this fic now!

TigerlilyRose said...

Hearing her gasp at my boldness, and feeling her pulse quicken. "My, you are wet for me, aren't you. Are you always so forward with men in the woods?" I asked, not really caring about the answer.

I pulled her up to sitting and stuffed her pouty lips with my ridged cock. Oh, how it throbbed for her hot wet mouth. I gently held her head and coaxed her up and down the shaft. Easing it down her throat little by little, until she was gasping for air.

Her mouth felt so good, I nearly lost my mind. In a frenzy, I flipped her over onto her knees and slammed my cock into her moist center, making her scream out. I drove my cock into her her....slamming, slamming, until her screams of pleasure penetrated my ears and caused venom to pool in my mouth.

I thrust into her one last time, her moist pussy lips pulsing around me rythmically, telling me she was cumming forcefully. As I pumped the last of my seed into her wet willing body, I sank my razor sharp teeth deep into the pulsing vein in her neck, injecting poisonous venom into her warm blood. As they mixed together, she began to writhe from the pain of the poison.

A scream pierced my ears from behind. "What have you done? What? Who? Are you? Alice? What did you do to Alice?"

TigerlilyRose said...

LMAO Word verify Stelar....We all write steler fiction.


OMG snother one...mankya...Jacob has a bad case of Mankya

Becky said...

@TLR I love where you went with this!!