Thursday 15 April 2010

Community FanFic Thursday - Midnight Sun!

Hello Ho's!  I'm finally home and MrStan is at work. All I need to do is get the kids back to school next week and I'll be all back to normal!  The weather's lovely here at the mo, all sunny and cheerful, fingers crossed it stays like it for a while now!

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Sunshine = sparkly vamps!

I finally got around to seeing Remember Me on Monday with Mary.  I'm not going to say anything about it now, because Becky saw it the same night and we've been having a chat with Nibbles and Mary about what we thought of it, and I'll post that soon.


Ok, on with CFF, it is Thursday after all!  We've had some new followers in the past week welcome to the depravity & thanks for joining us!  In case you've never seen Community Fanfic Thursday before, we basically have a go at writing a fanfic a bit each - anything goes apparently (yep, we even had bestiality one week *heave*).  If you want to have a turn then just post first to say that you're going to have a go, that way it stops people overlapping.  Today we're starting off with a paragraph from Midnight Sun.


 So Ho's, on your marks, get set, GO!

  Bella did not sleep as well tonight.  She thrashed in her blankets, her face sometimes worried, sometimes sad.  I wondered what nightmare haunted her...and then realized that perhaps I really didn't want to know.
  When she spoke, she mostly muttered derogatory things about Forks in a glum voice.  Only once, when she sighed out the words "Come back" and her hand twitched open - a wordless plea- did I have a chance to hope she might be dreaming of me.
 

35 comments:

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

Bella did not sleep as well tonight. She thrashed in her blankets, her face sometimes worried, sometimes sad. I wondered what nightmare haunted her...and then realized that perhaps I really didn't want to know.
When she spoke, she mostly muttered derogatory things about Forks in a glum voice. Only once, when she sighed out the words "Come back" and her hand twitched open - a wordless plea- did I have a chance to hope she might be dreaming of me...

I moved a little closer to the bed catching her scent, venom filling my mouth. It was torture being so near her, wanting to bite her, not wanting to bite her...as I knelt beside her bed I realised I was sniffing the air around her getting closer until my nose hovered just above her neck. Christ I was just about drooling and had to wipe my mouth.
"Get a grip Cullen for fucks sake you retard" I whispered to myself.
Bella rolled towards me and I pulled back so I didn't touch her...if I touched her I would be undone. The covers had gotten pushed down and were bunched around her thighs oh Lord I could smell her, smell her sex, it was intoxicating.
I'd never noticed that smell before because I didn't give a fuck about anyone else before I guessed.
I tentatively moved closer again, still sniffing, my nostrils flaring as her delicate smell reached me...my eyes closed and I groaned then clamped a hand over my mouth..by now I was thinking my eyes would be black as coal and scarey as fuck but I couldn't stop sniffing the air around her. I was like a goddamn pervert but I didn't care. I bent closer to her stomach, making myself think I was smelling her belly and chest when in reality I was much lower. I was getting hard, I was a surprised as anyone I'd never associated sex with wanting to kill someone.
I was musing about this as Bella groaned and her hand mnoved beneath her bed shorts and began carresing her private parts. Oh. My.God what the fuck was I gonna do with that?
I sat back on my heels watching the show, my own hand stroking what was turning into a monster erection.
Her hips moved as her fingers slid over her pussy and I fervently wished that I couldn't read minds but had x-ray vision like superman.
Suddenly as if the wish fairy had waved her wand Bella pushed her shorts down and spread her legs. I checked her face, nope, sound asleep, eyes in REM, I almost did a happy dance on my knees and clasped my hands in prayer haha this was better than anything I could read in a book....
Both of Bella's small hands were moving around her pussy, stroking with one and the other was slipping a finger between her lips, then moving back to her swollen clit. She slid her free hand back toward her breast and began pinching her nipple. I didn't know where to look...I wasn't shy just fuck, where to look!?
I knew i had to do something so I pinged the buttons open on my jeans glad I had 501's on and no zip, I grasped my raging, weeping hardon and began to stoke matching my hand to Bella's finger on her clit; she was really moving now back and forth and I was begining to feel the exquisite curling of waves in my stomach. Her hips were bucking as were my own and I was strangling my groans, if I could sweat, I would have been soaked by the intensity of the orgasm building in me. As she moaned louder I feared she would wake herself before I came...selfish much...hey its no fun running through the wood, trying to stuff and humungous stiffy back into jeans...Bella's face contorted and she let rip, her fingers plunging into her really wet pussy and she groaned her release. My hips convulsed and my cock shot vamp cum over my hand and the floor, I slumped over wishing I was cumming in her, biting her, taking her when a small voice said "Well, well Cullen, did you enjoy my show?"
I slowly looked up through my lashes and boy if I could blush I'd have been dying in flames now as Bella lay there looking at me still stroking her lips...
She smiled a lazy smile.."Cum much"....

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

Sorry for any mistakes, my fingers can't go as fast as my brain and I've just read MoBs and I'm a wee bit rattled LMAO

Stan said...

Oooh, was going to join in here, but just remembered the fic updates I need to read!

Laterz bbs xx

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

I slumped over wishing I was cumming in her, biting her, taking her when a small voice said "Well, well Cullen, did you enjoy my show?"
I slowly looked up through my lashes and boy if I could blush I'd have been dying in flames now as Bella lay there looking at me still stroking her lips...
She smiled a lazy smile.."Cum much"....

I stared at her...and stared at her until she said "Edward are you ok?"

I shook my head and still I stared; what was I going to say, hi Bella, sorry I've been coming here watching you and tonight I decided to jerk off...sounds plausible I thought cocking my head to one side.
Bella laughed and said "you look like a dog when you do that"
I grinned and said "Yeah I feel a bit like a dog, sorry about you know" and waved my hand at her and at my crotch. It was then I realised my cock was still hanging out.
"Oh for fucks sake" I muttered "can this be anymore embarrassing".I turned away and started stuffing little Eddie into my pants, thank God for vamp speed as it was all over in a second.
Bella laughed and then frowned as she pulled the blankets back up around her.
"What are you doing here..er besides jacking off and um watching me jack off?"
I spoke slowly so I could think about what I was saying, so I didn't scare her off..
"I've been watching you, I can't stop thinking about you, I wanted to see you sleep so I could look at you without you getting all shy and huffy about it"
Way to go Cullen my inner Eddie said, you really won't have come off all pervert stalker guy to her
"Oh...wait...you watch me, oh my God, I sleep talk, I drool, I SNORE" she yelled then clamped a hand across her mouth.
The door burst open and Chief Swan stood there "Bella, what the hell, are you ok?"
"Yeah Dad, just dreaming...sorry"
"Well don't make a habit of it, your snoring is bad enough" and he closed the door aain
I vaulted back over the window sill into the room and Bella's eyes got huge...
"How the, when did you, how can you?" she couldn't finish the sentences..fuck...fuck...fuck..what now Cullen.
"I'm different" I said
"Sure are that" she replied "how different?"
I shrugged, not meeting her eyes
"C'mon Cullen...how different...say it...out loud" she challenged me
"I'm a...I'm a" I couldn't tell her, she wouldn't want to talk to me let alone do the things I wanted to do with her.." I gotta go..I'm sure you can figure it out somehow...you're an intelligent girl" I grinned and added "with a hot bod".
I jumped back out of the window and ran off laughing. I heard her scramble out of bed to try see me leave
"Think about it Bella...work it out"
"Dammit Bella, shut up and go to sleep" yelled Charlie...

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

I'm the only one playing today....helloooooo, hellooooo, hello Norman?

Becky said...

I will go next....

Becky said...

"I'm a...I'm a" I couldn't tell her, she wouldn't want to talk to me let alone do the things I wanted to do with her.." I gotta go..I'm sure you can figure it out somehow...you're an intelligent girl" I grinned and added "with a hot bod".
I jumped back out of the window and ran off laughing. I heard her scramble out of bed to try see me leave
"Think about it Bella...work it out"
"Dammit Bella, shut up and go to sleep" yelled Charlie...

I ran through the forest feeling both elated and terrified. Elated because that was one of the bestBella pleasure herself. Terrified because I had been on the verge of telling what I truly am. I still wanted her to know, but that probably wouldn't end well for anyone.
As arrived back at our house, I saw Alice perched on the front step. She had a huge smirk on her face which meant she already knew everything. Crap!
"Hello Edward. Have a nice evening" Alice laughed at the dark look I shot her way. "You could have warned me Alice, since you obviously saw it happening!"
"Where's the fun in that" she replied. "Anyway, it needed to happen. you want things to progress between the two of you, don't you?" I ran my hands through my hair, tugging on the ends, trying to form an answer. " Yes, but when she finds out what I am, everthing will be finished!"
Alice got up and turned to go inside, calling over her shoulder, " You underestimate her Edward. It will work out, I have seen it". Before I could read her mind to see what she meant she started blocking her thoughts from me by reciting russian poetry and vanished inside the house.

It was sunny the next day so me and my 'siblings' all skipped school and spent the day hunting. I wanted to be ready for when I went to see Bella again.

It was dark now, past the time I knew she usually went to sleep. I climbed up the tree outside her house, wondering if the window would even be open. If she had any sense it would be locked up tight after last night. Clearly she had no sense of self preservation as the window was wide open, inviting me in.

As I looked over to her bed, expecting to see her sleeping form, I was met by a very much awake Bella staring back at me.
"You are late" she breathed, then a slow smile spread across her face, " Vampire...."

Shit.

Becky said...

I know there was no smut in that one, but now it is set up nicely for the next post lol.

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

Oooooo Becky....love it!

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

No, no smut is cool, can't have smut everytime although the Wease would disagree pmsl

Becky said...

mm I read MoBS too so my brain is swimming with smut, lol. Might have to write some more, I have got itchy fingers!!

Dangrdafne said...

I am moving to Europe so I can be in the same time zone as you lovely ladies. I hate that I can't do this, darn work. Can't wait to read it all tonite when I get home. Happy Thursday.

Becky said...

Ooh just re-read my post and looks like i managed to delete bits! It should have said

"I ran through the forest feeling both elated and terrified. Elated because that was one of the best orgasms I had ever exerienced watching Bella pleasure herself. "

Stupid blogger! hmpf.

Becky said...

going to add a litte more ....

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

As I looked over to her bed, expecting to see her sleeping form, I was met by a very much awake Bella staring back at me.
"You are late" she breathed, then a slow smile spread across her face, " Vampire...."

Shit.

Double shit..."um hi" my hand was running through my hair incessantly, at this rate I'd be bald...thank god for not being able to go bald I thought..shaking myself back to here and now I grinned ruefully "So you figured it out.."
Bella nodded and bounced happily on the bed..how can she be happy...why isn't she screaming and running for the hills although I could catch her easily and then I could bite her...venom flowed again into my mouth and I kinda slurped audibly.
Oh yeah that was cool, Bella was looking a little skittish now and I smiled again but that must have looked like a leer as she pressed herself back against the headboard glancing around the room.

"Whats the matter Isabella?" I asked carefully

" um nothing, um you kinda looked like you wanted to eat me and not in a good way" she stated

Oh boy...why'd she have to pop that into my head...eating Bella, going where her fingers had been the night before, tasting her flesh, licking her skin, biting on her throat....Whoa there Eddie, stop with the biting. My eyes must have glazed as suddenly she was right there in front of me, tugging on my arms "Edward, Edward...oh my god he's having a spaz attack"
I breathed deeply and then she yelled, my teeth were at her throat, I had bent her backwards and she was struggling, her heart pounding, her pulse racing...oh god I bet she would be fantastic, her blood was singing in her veins, calling me, one little bite, we could move on, move away. I could take her with me....
The door flew open and I was out of the window having thrown Bella back on the bed, her sobbing pounding in my head, Chief Swan was holding her, he was really worried. He had seen me......shit..fuck..shit fuck, Carlisle would have my gonads for this.
But wait, no he wasn't sure, he had seen someone but he didn't know who it was, he was asking her to tell him and she was talking, telling him...FUCK...she was, I couldn't read her mind. Back into Charlies quick...she was telling him....I stopped abruptly..she wasn't giving me up, what the...crazy girl.
I did do the happy dance right there in the road and when the wolf landed in front of me, I just nodded at it..."Sam" I said and ran off grinning like the fucking maniac I most surely was...

Becky said...

I did do the happy dance right there in the road and when the wolf landed in front of me, I just nodded at it..."Sam" I said and ran off grinning like the fucking maniac I most surely was...

I didn't get very far though, it would appear Sam hadn't come by himself. About 100m into the woods I was met by 3 more of the Quilette wolf pack. I pulled up in front of them, attempting to read their minds. Two of them were busy thinking about their girlfreinds and how far they had got. ew gross! But the last one, he was thinking about Bella. My Bella. There was no fucking way I was having that!!
I started towards him, but quickly moved back as he started to phase into human form. He retrieved some shorts from a tie round his ankle and slipped them on.
"Cullen"
"Jake"
"Just saw you leave the Swan residence in a bit of a hurry. Did she kick you out now that she knows what you are? Did she scream and call you a monster?" He was smiling now, and his two sidekicks snickered beside him.

"No" I lied, because lets face it, I had pretty much attacked her and left her crying. There was no way she didn't think of me as anthing but a monster at this point. No need to let the dog know that though.
" Her dad interrupted us, so I made mself scarce. Charlie doesn't need to know about any of this." I said waving my hand between the four of us.
"Yeak, right. I don't believe that for a second. I'll be chatting to Bella tomorrow, so I'll see what she has to say". With that he phased back and the 3 of them ran off into the woods. I noticed scraps of his denim shorts on the floor and laughed. Stupid dog!

With them gone my thoughts turned back to Bella. I needed to see her to make sure she is ok, to know what she is thinking. I need to see her before Jake does.

I ran back through the forest to Bella's house. I listened for Charlie's mind, but he was sleeping. I could hear his snoring and the slow rhythmic beat of his heart. Bella on the other hand was not asleep, I could hear her moving about in her bedroom, she was...pacing? And to my utter fucking amazement her window was wide open! Was she waiting for me?

Before I could change my mind I climbed up the tree and slipped into her bedroom.

"About fucking time" she whispered through gritted teeth. " Where did you go?"

I was confused to say the least. "I nearly bit you Bella. I left because I thought I had scared you to death. I thought you would want me to go".
She let out a long breath and shook her head. "No Edward, I didn't want you to go. You didn't bite me and I wasnt scared. Well maybe a little, you just took me by surprise." She took a tentative step towards me. "I knew you
woudn't hurt me, Alice said so."

Becky said...

Ooh its like tag teaming. You're up Nibbles!

TwiWeasel said...

@ Stan - I haven't had a chance to read anything besides the post yet, and since I'm at work, perhaps I'll wait to write something. I just wanted to mention that I thought the beastiality CFF was some of our more...er...creative work! BWahahahaha! Of course, this comes from the chick who had a convo regarding the pros/cons of Necrophilia!! Ahhhh...good times!

Becky said...

@TwiWeasel you know you want to add something. Just a little?

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

Fuck I wrote an epic and it got eaten fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuccccccccckkkkkkkkkkkk

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

Thats it, thats the 2nd time I typed that out, I'm not doing it again, I gotta go, fucking booger eating blogger...pfft ass muching fucking, comment eating dick splash fucking piece of crap!

Becky said...

Oh that just sucks! I am dying to know what you wrote now! lol.

TwiWeasel said...

@ Becky - Yes, I do want to. But I had company over my lunch break and am busier than a one legged man in an ass kicking contest at work. You're lucky I've gotten this much written! *pout*

Becky said...

@TwiWeasel sorry, I forget that you are still at work! I am just about to crack open that bottle of wine that is calling me from the fridge.

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

Ok I will try again

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

I was confused to say the least. "I nearly bit you Bella. I left because I thought I had scared you to death. I thought you would want me to go".
She let out a long breath and shook her head. "No Edward, I didn't want you to go. You didn't bite me and I wasnt scared. Well maybe a little, you just took me by surprise." She took a tentative step towards me. "I knew you
woudn't hurt me, Alice said so."

Alice said so my mind yelled to me, Alice..."Alice, what the hell has Alice got to do with this? Oh um I saw Jacob Black earlier with his wol...er do you know anything about Jake by the way" I asked casually
"Well he's kinda buff these days and loves his damn jhorts but otherwise he's just a kid who has a crush on me" replied Bella walking away from me. She picked up a brush and began pulling it through her long dark hair. As she sank to the floor I did the same behind her my long legs either side of hers. She froze mid stroke and I apologised for being so at ease around her that I forgot how different I was. I took the brush and began to get rid of the tangles in her hair, the smell was overwhelming and I grabbed a handful of it breathing deeply..."Oh Bella, you have no idea how much your scent affects me, your smell calls to me" I lifted her hair away from her neck and ran my nose along and around by her jaw. She shivered and I smiled. My lips took their place skimming along her jawline, my tongue flicking out tasting her skin...I think I cried out because she turned in my arms "Ow...what is poking in me..oh..." her eyes darkened and she began to play with the lace on my sweat pants...

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

not finished

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

She pulled the tie around my waist loose and reached down inside to grip my hardon, I was rock solid, yeah I know, but I look like marble so poetic license ok, her small hand mved up and down, her thumb rubbing over the tip smearing pre cum, I groaned and her lips silenced me. She moved back and forth along my shaft, the warmth was amazing and made me want her all the more, images of her touching herself, her fingers sliding in between her lips and over her swollen clit. How I wanted to take that in my mouth and suck, how I wanted my tongue penetrating her, my tongue is long and extremely fast when I want it to be I thought of how I could make her cum. Her hand gripped and twisted, skimming the head of my cock, her other hand cupped my balls, stroking. oh fuck when I thought how hot she would feel when my cock entered her it was all over, as I growled my climax, I lurched towards her, teeth bared, her throat looked so inviting, her pulse racing and I could hear her heart beating at a crazy rate. How I wanted to sink my teeth into her. She pulled back and it was only as her fingers were about to touch her lips I came to and stopped her. "No Bella, it's not um good for you...I guess I'm not good for you"
She kissed me hard, putting everything she had into it and I did the same back, it was only when she went limp in my arms i realised she'd passed out. I'd only kissed a few non vamp girls and they always passed out. I put her to bed and washed her hands in case she was tempted to lick her fingers. I kissed her forehead and jumped out of the window silently.
Running back home I knew I had to talk to Alice & Carlisle. Would Bella agree to change for me because if I didn't have her soon I was going to explode into fucking pixie dust...

NibbleitPattinsonakaNebilet said...

Ok, sigh, I;m done lol. Catch you guys tomorrow xxx

Becky said...

Go Nibbles! did the double entry get rid of your blogger swallowing problem then?

Becky said...

Me next...

Becky said...

Running back home I knew I had to talk to Alice & Carlisle. Would Bella agree to change for me because if I didn't have her soon I was going to explode into fucking pixie dust...

I burst throught the front door to find Carlisle and Alice waiting for me. Before I could say anything Carlisle jumped write in "The Chief's daughter Edward? Really? Could you have chosen anyone more dangerous to us? If she tells her Dad we are all in the shit!"
"Carlisle" Alice cut in " I've already told you that she won't. You know what I saw, why are you doing this?" They share a meaningful look and before they can block their thoughts I catch a glimpse of Alice's vision. Me and Bella in the woods, but she is different. She has...golden eyes? Could this mean she will change, be like me?

"Is this true" I snap, "did you really see this Alice?" I look at her and she nods her head.
I turn to Carlisle, "Then what is there to worry about. She will change and be mine forever." I am beyond excited now, the thought of Bella, strong and unbreakable. Oh god the possibilities...."
"Edward", Carlisle is still looking at me like I am mad. What is his problem! "Does she want to become a Vampire? Have you even discussed it yet? What about Charlie, her friends? Do you know what you are asking of her?" He is pissing on my parade, fucker! " But Alice saw it", I realise I am whining but I don't give a shit.
"Alice's visions can change, you know that", ever the voice of reason, Carlisle.
" I will talk to her about it tomorrow, ok?" With that I fly up the stairs to my room, not bothering to wait for his reply. I read his thoughts anyway, he thinks I am moving to fast. That I should go slow with Bella. But I can't, I want her now. If I take her in human form I am sure to either break her or bite her. God, I really really want to bite her. I can feel the venom flooding my mouth just thinking about it.
Thats not all I can feel as I think about taking Bella. My cock is now straining to get out, so I give him a little help and undo my buttons. He springs free and I start to stroke up and down, squeezing slighlty as I reach the head. I imagine Bella's hands not mine, that she is slowly stroking me with her warm little fingers. I start to increase the pace as I picture her, biting her lip with concentration. How I want to bite that lip, that neck. That warm, pulsing neck with the sweet, sweet nectar running underneath the surface...A few more strokes and I am done. The thought of tasting Bella's blood is just too much, I lie back on the bed trying to calm the bloodlust raging through me. She needs to change soon or I will surely just do it by accident, or Kill her.
With that sobering thought I am eventually me again, I clean myself up and head downstairs.
I need to talk to Bella and I need to do it right.

"Carlisle?".....

TwiWeasel said...

@ Becky - Yep, still at work. BTW...you suck. *grin*

Becky said...

@Twiweasel I try, lol. Wine is going down a treat!

TwiWeasel said...

OK, now that I've read it all, lemme just say that you two did a fab job without me!! It's the Nibbles and Becky show! TA DA!

@ Nibs - I was gonna say, I usually try to type my stuff in word and copy/paste it in. I started doing that the first time blogger ate my contribution to CFF!! Also, I don't always think there has to be smut...but it's always a bonus if it's there!! LOL

@ Becky - I'm heading home, but there will be no wine. I have a meeting to attend and then supper to make, blah blah blah... *boo*

See ya later, hos!