Hey Ho's I am recovered from Remember Me. I'm not saying anything and even when I do my post with pictures of us at it I won't give away anything so no worries there but WOW! Loved it, cried like a bitch being butt fucked by a donkey. It was THAT good, well we enjoyed it lol.
Yah...I know...ouch indeed!
Any hoo its Thursday again so its fanfic day and we're gonna see how bad we can Break Dawn down pmsl.
Thought this looked kinda good...thanks to mimeto92So here is the passage, well excerpt I've chosen, it can go anywhere really
"For several years, my biggest personality trait was going to be thirsty. It would take some time before I could be me again. And even when I was in control of myself, I would never feel exactly the way I felt now. Human… and passionately in love. I wanted the complete experience before I traded in my warm, breakable, pheromone-riddled body for something beautiful, strong… and unknown. I wanted a real honeymoon with Edward. And, despite the danger he feared this would put me in, he’d agreed to try."
Hmmm so where are we going with this today...follow the feather strewn road hehe
Bleurgh...still shoulda been me lol
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"For several years, my biggest personality trait was going to be thirsty. It would take some time before I could be me again. And even when I was in control of myself, I would never feel exactly the way I felt now. Human… and passionately in love. I wanted the complete experience before I traded in my warm, breakable, pheromone-riddled body for something beautiful, strong… and unknown. I wanted a real honeymoon with Edward. And, despite the danger he feared this would put me in, he’d agreed to try."
"Edward" I said softly "It's going to be ok; we'll get through this. I know we will, we love each other and you're so much better at controlling yourself around me, you said so yourself my blood doesn't bother you anymore"
Edward looked at me through his lashes, my breath hitched at how glorious he looked. His face was perfection...his cock has got to be the same I mused....What was that was he speaking I'd zoned out looking at him again. I shook my head "um...sorry Edward, what was that"
He growled at me "Bella, for fucks sake why can't you listen, listen and breathe, is it so hard to do that anymore?"
Edward had swore at me, what the fuck was that about? He never swore at me...other people yes but me??
"Are you ok Edward? Its going to be ok" I smiled hesitantly willing it so.
"Arrgghhh, God, you make me insane, I hang on by a bare thread to my inner monster when I'm with you and now you're forcing me to...to...fuck you while you're human. You have no idea" he ground out through clenched teeth.
His arm shot out and gripped the back of my head pulling me to him, his lips crushed mine and his cold tongue forced past my teeth, I couldn't breathe, what was he doing, ow my head hurt, he was gripping so tightly, I could hear animal like groans from him and he hung on to me tighter.
He wasn't holding back, I felt like my head would explode, he could kill me, shit, I struggled against him, my fists beating against his chest but nothing, it was like banging on steel so I went limp, hung in his grip and slowly he came back to me.
"See Bella, see what I could do and this is just kissing, what if I was to let go while I'm slamming my dick into you, I could break you so bad..I can't do it"
"You're going back on it, you're giving up on the honeymoon?" I accused
"Yes, maybe even the wedding unless you agree to change straight after it, before we fuck"
His face was fixed...not hard for a vamp really I thought, as I was about to argue again, Alice burst into the room..."Don't you dare agree Bella, you motherfucker Edward, you know you can hang on, I've seen this...it was kinda gross seeing your butt bouncing up and down and your head Bella but it can work, honest...what about a trial run...a pre wedding BJ...I could stay...just to help out in case anything happened" she gabbled out in a rush..
Edwards eyes lit up...pre wedding blow job written like Xmas lights all over his face...I sighed, men, vamps was there really any difference...
"O-kay" we both said at the same time...our eyes met and Edward licked his lips the same time as I did...lets do it I whispered to them
@Nibbles Wow! that was fab, I forgot I was reading CFF for a bit, lol!
I will have a go next!
Edwards eyes lit up...pre wedding blow job written like Xmas lights all over his face...I sighed, men, vamps was there really any difference...
"O-kay" we both said at the same time...our eyes met and Edward licked his lips the same time as I did...lets do it I whispered to them
"Yay!" Alice squealed, jumping up and down, clapping. Really Alice? Are you that excited to see your brother get his cock out?
Edward shuffled to the edge of the bed and I knelt down in front of him. I turned to look at Alice who was leaning againt the door frame, watching intently. "I know you are here for my safety Alice, but do you really have to watch? Can't you go over by the window or something?" I was excited by the prospect of finally having Edward's cock in my mouth, but that didn't mean I wanted cheering on from the sidelines! Reluctantly Alice walked across the room and faced the window.
I reached for Edwards jeans, undid the button and started to slide the zip down, slowly. I glanced up at him as I pulled his jeans open, he was watching me closely, his eyes dark and full of want. I reached into his boxers and grasped his very hard, and very big, ice cold cock. Edward let out a hiss as my warm hands wrapped round him, moving up and down, taking in all his glory. Holy shit! It really is massive and rock hard, can I really do this?
He must have sensed my hesitation, his hands found their way into my hair, gently pushing my head down towards him. I guess I can!
I licked my lips and took him into my mouth, swirling my tongue round the tip before taking as much of him in as I could. His hold on my hair tightened and he started moving me up and down. I gently grazed him with my teeth and he growled with pleasure. Hey, I am the BJ queen, who knew! I started to speed up, using my teeth and tongue to bring him to the edge. His growls were getting louder and he had an almost painful grasp on my hair. I picked up my pace, sucking hard, certain he was about to come. Just as I prepared to drink his vampire love juice, Alice shouted from across the room..
"er Bella, you need to move you probably shouldn't swallow that!"
Oops! Too late.....
whooo go Becky, go Becky lol, so did she swallow or is she like hamster cheeked, read on to find out PMSL
Hey, I am the BJ queen, who knew! I started to speed up, using my teeth and tongue to bring him to the edge. His growls were getting louder and he had an almost painful grasp on my hair. I picked up my pace, sucking hard, certain he was about to come. Just as I prepared to drink his vampire love juice, Alice shouted from across the room..
"er Bella, you need to move you probably shouldn't swallow that!"
Oops! Too late.....
"OMG Bella...did you swallow" asked Alice wide eyed
I shook my head from side to side swilling ice cold vamp cum around my cheeks. I looked at Edward who was lying flat out on the bed, his cock twitching like an epileptic against his stomach....man he was still frickin huge, I began to smile but as I dribbled over my chin I shut my mouth and looked worriedly at Alice.
"Quick bathroom now" and off we hustled.
Kneeling in front of the toilet I spat Edwards venomous cum out...
"Now rinse Bella, rinse as if your life depends on it, do NOT swallow one drop else it is over" Alice was pissing herself laughing as she said it. "Oh God I never thought I'd be saying this to my best friend" and she collapsed on the floor.
I glared at her and took a deep breath as Edward appeared in the doorway..
"How we doing" he started to say as suddenly I choked and swallowed.
I grabbed my throat yelling then my throat was on fire like the worse case of tonsillitis ever and I shut the hell up hardly croaking.
"Bells" Edward and Alice shouted "Oh fuck, oh fuck oh fuck, Alice wht can I do, what do you see, come on Alice, tune in, turn on, drop out, do something for fucks sake"
" I'm not a tv" yelled Alice as I gargled piteously on the floor, writhing in agony.
"You have 3 options grasshopper" said Alice in a trance "you can rip her throat out and end it"
My eyes bugged out and I tried to shake my head to the negative..
"you can let it take its course and you will have your wish although it might be noticed that Bella is different when she's snapping at the guests throats or you can give her the mother of all hickeys and suck your junk out of her...although it may be too late for that brother o' mine"
Edward looked at me convulsing on the floor silently like Munch's the Scream and groaned
"Fuck" he yelled and slammed his fist into the bathroom wall, taking out part of it. Dad would not be pleased.
Scooping me up he said to Alice "we gotta get her to our house, see if Carlisle can help her, it was only a drop she swallowed" he said hopefully.
In less than 5 minutes I was in Edwards room on the leather chaise rolling in agony and cursing Alice the BJ suggester.
Esme looked close to tears if that were possible, "Edward, this is so selfish of you, how many other girls have we had to put out of their misery after your bj antics, I thought you were past all that, you were going to be married" she wailed
"Were, Esme? I still am just we will have to go away somewhere and wait...tell Charlie, I dunno, tell him something then we can come back, marry and everything will be fine"
Hello! I thought, in agony, dying, waiting to be reborn, someone, anyone. They were all bickering in front of me while I died and no one was takig any notice...harrumpf...I kicked edwards stero and everyone turned to me...
Hamster cheeks. rofl!
Is it just me & you today? lol. I feel like the teacher from Ferris B. Anyone else want to jump in? ...anyone..anyone....
LOL Ferris, class film, love it so much I think I have watched it well over 50 times now haha...Robert Pattinson you're my hero!
Hello! I thought, in agony, dying, waiting to be reborn, someone, anyone. They were all bickering in front of me while I died and no one was takig any notice...harrumpf...I kicked edwards stero and everyone turned to me...
"Oh Bella, please don't do that it was a present from me and Carlisle" said Esme sounding pissy
I rolled my eyes and tried to squawk...exsqueeze me? at her then it all went black...
"Bella, Bella? BELLA" a voice yelled so loud in my ear. I sat up banging my head on someone elses "Ow" we said and grabbed our respective foreheads
I opened my eyes to see Emmett in font of me
"Wha...what's going on?"
"Bells" he yelled looking pleased "now we can have some fun, I'm so gonna beat your ass, strongest vampire in the bunch...pfft whatever, come on, everyones waiting"
I was whooshed through the air to my ffet and landed gracefully without falling over or any shit like that. WOAH I thought, as we walked...fluidly it appeared out of the room I caught site of a gorgepus brunette in the mirror. She looked kinda familiar and I thought Rosalie had dyed her hair or the Cullens hd visitors but when I stopped so did she. I put my had up, so did she.
"WTF" I yelled, Emmett get in here and then I clapped my hand over my mouth, the windows were vibrating..what was wrong with my voice.
Emmett scooched back in laughing "Bella not so loud the whole of Forks will hear you and you're ill remember...mono?"
"Mono" I chuckled tomyself, how apt...
Emmett explained how I had changed, that the wedding was still on and how it appeared my gift was self control. I had woken up twice already and drifted off, my change had happened quicker than anyone elses so that was it...I was now a vampire.
"Race ya Emmett" I laughed as a shot past him faster than a speeding bullet...I heard a faint hey no fair and laughed out loud for the hell of it.
I stopped short as Edward appeared.
"Oh you're happy are you, what about Renee, Charlie, school, your friends...you are so finishing school Bella, we all have to go...still!"
Mom, Dad, OMG what was I gonna do....
ah spelling went mad and I made a new word-gorgepus as in gorgeous pussycat lol ok it was a mistake
gorgepus! I like it. I didnt even notice it first time round, had to go back and search. (yes, I am that sad, lol).
this is a pretty good story lol, shall we do a collaberation and write a fic when I'm off haha, you read my comment on twibite?
@ Becky - OMG..."OOps! Too late!" made me laugh so hard I choked and had to run and get a drink. I'm at work for craps sake so I couldn't even share my amusement with anyone! *sigh* Can't add now...
I stopped short as Edward appeared.
"Oh you're happy are you, what about Renee, Charlie, school, your friends...you are so finishing school Bella, we all have to go...still!"
Mom, Dad, OMG what was I gonna do....
Mmmm what I'd really like to do is Edward! Now I am a Vampire there is nothing to stop us, oh just imagining his big hard..
"Bella please" yelled Jasper "horny much?" oh, I forgot about Jasper and his "feelings". I will have to try not to think about Edward and his lovely long.. "BELLA!"
"Sorry Jasper!" I heard laughing behind me and turned to see Edward and Alice looking at me with knowing smirks. If I could blush I would be beetroot right about now.
"So guys, what happens now? I mean people are going to notice a difference, right?"
They all sniggered, "Well yeah! You don't fall over all the time for starters!" Yawn! Vampires are so not funny.
"Don't worry Bella", said Alice, " you will be surprised what people are willing to believe". We can just tell them all you had a bit of 'work' done before the wedding. It will be fine". Great plastic surgery at 18, I am 'that' girl!
As I was musing over this delightful turn of events, I suddenly noticed everyone had disappeared. Everyone except for Edward. I looked over at him and gasped. His eyes were once again black, a low growl escaped him as he stalked slowly towards me. " You better run Bella. I am going to chase you, catch you and then do what ever I like with you. What.
ever. I. like. He repeated the last part slowly, smirking with each word. "Now RUN!"
I squealed and turned, speeding into the forest. I could hear him behind me, getting closer. OMG! Edward wants to do unspeakable things to me, at last!. Why the hell am I running again?? Before I had the chance to stop myself, Edward crashed into me from behind, sending us both crashing to the floor. Oh, he caught me. Fucking excellent! Now what?......
Yes, lets write. We would be awesome, lol! Off to twibite, now......
Having recovered from my coughing fit, I promptly had another while reading your contribution @ Nibs. You kinda pulles a SM-style fade to black thing on us...which is fine. We don't need to worry about that pain thing...lets get to the vamp humpin!
I will contribute later...harumph...got work to do! (boo)
Where is everyone? Gimme a few to write...
I am still here, lol. Was tempted to do the next bit, but now I don't have to! *rubs hands in anticipation*
I thought it was gonna be the nibbles and becky show lol we were doing quite well!
I squealed and turned, speeding into the forest. I could hear him behind me, getting closer. OMG! Edward wants to do unspeakable things to me, at last!. Why the hell am I running again?? Before I had the chance to stop myself, Edward crashed into me from behind, sending us both crashing to the floor. Oh, he caught me. Fucking excellent! Now what?......
Edward's hands were everywhere at once. Gripping my breasts and rubbing my snatch and pulling my hair to pull my head back... suddenly, I was naked, my clothes having been torn from me by his lightning quick hands. I stood before him, panting (although, I really didn't need to breath) and he looked at me. And as he looked, his mouth turned up in my favorite smile and his eyes darkened even more. "Oh, the things I want to do to you," he murmered before his clothing lay strewn about with mine and his mouth was on my body.
He sucked my right nipple into his mouth and bit down lightly before tracing a line with his tongue to the left and repeating the action there. Before I could blink, he had pushed me down onto my back and his mouth was on me...there!
"Oh, God, Bella! How I've wanted to do this to you for so long!" He groaned into my slick pussy. He moved his face up and down my slit and every time he moved up, his nose would rub my clit, shooting sparks into my body. His long fingers came into play and he buried three of them as deep as he could into my dripping hole. I cried out from the sheer intensity of it all, right before he began fucking me with those long, loooooong fingers.
"Oh! Edward...I'm....gonna...!" I let loose with a string of unintellegible words and sounds as I had my first Vampiric Orgasm. (Which, BTW puts puny human O's to shame.) Before I had even begun to come down from my high, though, Edward slammed his massive cock into me and began to plow my field so to speak. All that could be heard for miles, I'm sure was the rhythmic slapping of our bodies together as well as our grunts and moans.
Suddenly, I couldn't take it anymore! I wanted to be in charge! I wanted to run the show!
Using my superior strength, I flipped him over onto his back, without breaking our sexual connection. This position drove his dick even deeper into my pussy and freed his hands to grope and feel. I rode him like I was breaking a wild stallion, and I never tired.
My second Vampiric Orgasm suddenly came *snicker* as a surprise when his grip on my hips changed and his fingers made their way around to grip my ass cheeks. His finger tips brushed against my puckered hole briefly, and the shock of it sent me tumbling over the edge into oblivion, and bringing him with me...
@ Becky & Nibs - YOu two were doing wonderfully...but I want to play too!! I didn't proofread for errors, so deal with it!
@Twiweasel And play you did! lol. Now that should have been how Breaking Dawn went!!
'puckered hole' makes be giggle uncontrollably!
( is that a word?).
Just bathing the monsters. bbl.
Whoo loving it. We rock!! When I'm off shall we have a 3 way yeah baby!
Oh man I gotta go :0( I will try and get on tomorrow for fff but have got lots of work again
@ Becky - You know, I really struggled with that phrase. It came down to "puckered hole" or just plain "ass hole" and since I used ass cheeks, I went with puckered hole! Bwahahahaha!
Glad you liked it!
@Nibbles 'This way for a 3 way', sounds like a dvd I own, lol. Enough about that, *cough*, I might have a go at writing now.
@ Nibs - I missed your 3 way comment. Yes, please! Funnily enough, you are not the first to offer me a 3 way this week. Strange...
@ Becky - I used to love a movie called 3 some...not porn, believe it or not. It had Stephen Baldwin in it.
My second Vampiric Orgasm suddenly came *snicker* as a surprise when his grip on my hips changed and his fingers made their way around to grip my ass cheeks. His finger tips brushed against my puckered hole briefly, and the shock of it sent me tumbling over the edge into oblivion, and bringing him with me...
As I gradually came down from my incredible high, I realised I was cuddled into Edwards side, with one leg draped over him. Had I still been human, I would no doubt have been exhausted by now. Being a Vampire certainly had its advantages as far as sex was concerned. I was not tired, at all. Infact I was ready to go again and again....
I squirmed a bit, rubbing my thighs together to get some much needed friction. Edward seemed to notice my renewed arousal, no doubt he could smell it, damn Vamire senses. His hand slid down my back and rested on my arse cheeks, gently stroking small circles on my skin. As his fingers dipped lower towards my back entrance, he leaned in to whisper in my ear. "I am going to take you here." He pressed a finger tip firmly against my puckered hole. *giggle* "Very soon. I want to take you in every way possible".
His words sent a shiver down my spine. Holy shit! Surely his massive cock was too big to fit in there! The thought alone caused me to clench my cheeks together.
At my obvious trepidation, Edward laughed softly into my hair. "Don't worry love, I wont hurt you. I will make it so good you will be begging for more." Hmph! Don't think so, 'love'! Aint no way you are putting your hose beast into my backdoor alley! "I don't know Edward", I sort of whined "you are really big. Will it fit?"
His smug grin appeared at the mention of his big cock. Typical man! "I can see you are going to need some persuading on this Bella. Let me show all the ways I can make you feel good". With that he flipped me onto my back and slipped two of his magic sex fingers into my now dripping pussy. He started slowly pushing them in and out, circling my clit with his thumb "Oh Edward!" I cried, arching my back. "That feels soooo good". Before I realised what he was doing, Edward took one of his fingers, now coated in my juices, and pushed it firmly into my ass. "Oh!" I squeaked.....
Wow ladies! It's a HOT Vampy Lovin' story!! Yummy!
Well - let's see if I can add a little of my own flavor to it...
Before I realised what he was doing, Edward took one of his fingers, now coated in my juices, and pushed it firmly into my ass. "Oh!" I squeaked.....
Surprised by Edward's gentle, yet urgent invasion of an uncharted area of my body, I realized that my body belonged to him now. All of it. It was his playground. And his was mine.
Boosted into another building orgasm, Edward removed his finger from my ass as he grinned wickedly. Still rhythmically circling my button, knowing he was pushing me further and further toward the moment of ultimate satisfaction, he said, "Now that wasn't so bad, was it?"
I slowly and gently shook me head "no" as my back began to arch.
Edward answered, "Don't worry love, we'll leave your ass alone until later. I'll ease you into the experience slowly... However, I seem to have a problem that you could possibly solve..."
He was playing with me and I wanted to play along. "Oh yeah? What tha-aat?" I moaned that last word as he buried two of his fingers in my pussy.
"Well - I think there's something we need to get *cough* straight *ehem* between us," Edward said as he indicated his rock hard cock with his eyes.
"Oh, I think I can handle THAT!" I said grasping his dick in my marble fist. My perfect body reacted to his perfect body as he slid his hand from the edge of my stomach around to my back. My back arched just as his hand needed a place to be. Our rhythm was flawlessly in tune.
Still hovering effortlessly above me, he looked me deeply in the eyes and raised his other hand to my cheek. It felt warm. And a comfort as I had never known washed over me. This was love. This was real passionate everlasting love. And it's mine...
With a sharp intake of breath, I realized Edward was inside me now. We caressed and gave gentle kisses. Soon the hunger inside me began to grow and I moved urgently, as did he. Gentleness was replaced with lust. Caresses became grabs and gropes. Desperation nearly consuming me, I grap his face with both of my hands and kiss him passionately, deeply.
As our movements grow in intensity, Edward's cock is driven deeper inside me than I knew was possible. My venom lubricated the rhythm of his thrusts and soon we were locked in a silmultaneous crescendo of epic proportions. A heart beat later his warm venom was coursing through my body and we were at last one.
Wow that was a perfect bedtime story ;) Great job Nibbles, Becky, TwiWeasel and StarlitViolets! Sorry I couldn't play toda. My computer was in view of a co-worker from our Corporate site so I couldn't even read anything on this site (knowing what day it was) until tonite. Mmmm mmmm mmm
@DangrDafne - Awww - poor Daf, you were in Twi-seclusion. Sorry. :(
I'm a West Coaster, so I often miss the CFF boat too.
Well - at least you got a good bedtime story! Maybe it will bring you lemony dreams...
Whooo, way to go girls! Sorry you missed out Dafs...Twi no mans land sucks...I'm dreading being on holiday in August, will have to make sure son takes ipod, charger, spare charger etc lol
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